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Dear Madam,

I would like to humbly ask your permission again to please allow my sister to extend the duration of her staying in the accommodation which I am currently living as she is still searching a job and waiting for her data flow verification to be completed.

Hoping for your kind consideration regarding this matter.

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Dear Madam,

I would like to humbly ask your permission again to please allow my sister [ 1] to extend the duration of her stay ing in the accommodation in which I am currently living [ 2] as she is still searching for a job and waiting for her data flow verification to be completed.

Hoping I thank you for your kind consideration regarding this matter and trust that you will help us.

Yours faithfully,

Ronald McCuddy

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Try to be more specific:

1- Mention your sister's name, e.g. “... my sister Maria”.

2- Specify how long you need the extension to be, e.g. “... until the end of April”.

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