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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my strong interest in employment to be a part of your Organization . To this end I am enclosing a complete resume outlining my qualifications for your review and consideration.

I hold a Bachelor’s Degree in Computer Engineering from XXX, and have nearly 12 years of exposure to Information Technology. I am thoroughly versed in a wide range of technical skills including: Computer Assembly, Software Installation, Computer Repairs and upgrades, Basic Networking, etc. Presently, I am planning to take Microsoft Certified Desktop Support Technician (MCDST), a certification given by Microsoft. I am studying in a self-paced basis.

Currently, I am employed to XXX as a staff in the College Library. With Bachelor’s Degree in Computer Engineering, I have established a distinguished reputation as a strong technical contributor. On my first year, I have been assigned to create our section’s website. A couple of years later, I have been involved to major projects of the Library including International Conferences held in the University. I have also been assigned to encode, edit, and upload our serials holdings to our database.

Working in an Academic Environment gives me opportunity to build my interpersonal relationship and strengthen my service orientation. It also keeps me updated to Information Technology giving me confidence to my every decision.

In addition to Academic and Work accomplishments, you will note that I have been very industrious and hard working. As my resume will attest, I have been continually employed since graduating from college. Despite this continues employment; I have also managed to keep a healthy living by doing extracurricular activities, Showing ability to effectively plan and manage my time.

Should you feel that I could contribute added value to your organization, I would appreciate if you would call me at Tel No. XXX or you can send an email to XXX. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss career prospects with your organization.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely,

Erasmus
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I'm a newbie here. Is it possible for someone to look at my letter and check(ed) it for grammar. Thanks in advance. Kudos for the admin!

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my strong interest in employment (x to be a part of x) within your organization . To this end I am enclosing a complete resume, outlining my qualifications, for your review and consideration.

I hold a Bachelor’s Degree in Computer Engineering from XXX, and have nearly 12 years (x of exposure to x)experience in the field of Information Technology. I am thoroughly versed in a wide range of technical skills including: Computer Assembly, Software Installation, Computer Repairs and upgrades, Basic Networking, etc. Presently, I am planning to take Microsoft Certified Desktop Support Technician (MCDST), a certification given by Microsoft. I am studying (xinx) on a self-paced basis.

Currently, I am employed (xtox) by XXX (x as a staff x) in the College Library. With a Bachelor’s Degree in Computer Engineering, I have established a distinguished reputation as a strong technical contributor. (xOnx) In my first year I (xhave beenx) was assigned to create our section’s website. A couple of years later, I (xhave beenx)was involved (xtox) in major projects of the Library including International Conferences held in the University. I have also been assigned to encode, edit, and upload our serials holdings to our database.

Working in an academic environment gives me the opportunity to build my interpersonal relationships and strengthen my service orientation. It also keeps me updated (xtox) with Information Technology giving me confidence (xto my everyx) in decision making.

In addition to Academic and Work accomplishments, you will note that I have been very industrious and hard working. As my resume will attest, I have been continually employed since graduating from college. Despite this continuous employment; I have also managed to (xkeepx) maintain a healthy (xlivingx) lifestyle by doing extracurricular activities, showing ability to effectively plan and manage my time.

Should you feel that I could contribute (xadded valuex) in a valuable way to your organization, I would appreciate it if you would call me at Tel No. XXX or you can send an email to XXX. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss career prospects with your organization.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully, (xSincerelyx), Only use "sincerely" if you are addressing the person by name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith.

Erasmus

An excellent letter Nloresco. Just a few adjustments.

Good luck!

LRVEmotion: smile
@la reine Victoria

Thank you very much! Here is the revised letter.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my strong interest in employment within your organization . To this end I am enclosing a complete resume, outlining my qualifications, for your review and consideration.

I hold a Bachelor’s Degree in Computer Engineering from xxx, and have nearly 12 years experience in the field of Information Technology. I am thoroughly versed in a wide range of technical skills including: Computer Assembly, Software Installation, Computer Repairs and upgrades, Basic Networking, etc. Presently, I am planning to take Microsoft Certified Desktop Support Technician (MCDST), a certification given by Microsoft. I am studying on a self-paced basis.

Currently, I am employed by xxx in the College Library. With a Bachelor’s Degree in Computer Engineering, I have established a distinguished reputation as a strong technical contributor. In my first year I was assigned to create our section’s website. A couple of years later, I was involved in major projects of the Library including International Conferences held in the University. I have also been assigned to encode, edit, and upload our serials holdings to our database.

Working in an academic environment gives me the opportunity to build my interpersonal relationships and strengthen my service orientation. It also keeps me updated with Information Technology giving me confidence in decision making.

In addition to academic and work accomplishments, you will note that I have been very industrious and hard working. As my resume will attest, I have been continually employed since graduating from college. Despite this continuous employment; I have also managed to maintain a healthy lifestyle by doing extracurricular activities, showing ability to effectively plan and manage my time.

Should you feel that I could contribute in a valuable way to your organization, I would appreciate it if you would call me at xxx or you can send an email to xxx. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss career prospects with your organization.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

nloresco
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Nloresco@la reine Victoria

Thank you very much! Here is the revised letter.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my strong interest in employment within your organization . To this end I am enclosing a complete resume, outlining my qualifications, for your review and consideration.

I hold a Bachelor’s Degree in Computer Engineering from xxx, and have nearly 12 years experience in the field of Information Technology. I am thoroughly versed in a wide range of technical skills including: Computer Assembly, Software Installation, Computer Repairs and upgrades, Basic Networking, etc. Presently, I am planning to take Microsoft Certified Desktop Support Technician (MCDST), a certification given by Microsoft. I am studying on a self-paced basis.

Currently, I am employed by xxx in the College Library. With a Bachelor’s Degree in Computer Engineering, I have established a distinguished reputation as a strong technical contributor. In my first year I was assigned to create our section’s website. A couple of years later, I was involved in major projects of the Library including International Conferences held in the University. I have also been assigned to encode, edit, and upload our serials holdings to our database.

Working in an academic environment gives me the opportunity to build my interpersonal relationships and strengthen my service orientation. It also keeps me updated with Information Technology giving me confidence in decision making.

In addition to academic and work accomplishments, you will note that I have been very industrious and hard working. As my resume will attest, I have been continually employed since graduating from college. Despite this continuous employment; I have also managed to maintain a healthy lifestyle by doing extracurricular activities, showing ability to effectively plan and manage my time.

Should you feel that I could contribute in a valuable way to your organization, I would appreciate it if you would call me at xxx or you can send an email to xxx. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss career prospects with your organization.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

nloresco

That's fine now Nloresco.

Regards,

LRV