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Help with punctuation of sentence

The wound was cauterized with the Bovie however blood continued to ooze from the lateral edge
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She was an angry appearing female; who was crying, screaming, and kicking.
Pretty good, but the semicolon there is inappropriate, since the second clause is an essential part of the description of the female. Also, it would be more common to put "angry looking" rather than "angry appearing". so you could go with "She was an angry looking female who was crying, screaming, and kicking." Even smoother would be "She was an angry looking female, crying, screaming and kicking", which has more punch somehow.

Hope that helps.
Rommie
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