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1. Explain what new skills and knowledge you expect to gain from the scholarship awards of Master of Science in Finance? Please be as specific as possible
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I will learn rigorous and advanced intellectual training in banking, finance and economics on how to understand global financial industry that will sharpen my knowledge and provide me with all the advanced technical and analytical skills necessary to differentiate myself in the financial services marketplace in order to enhance career prospects in the field of finance and related areas.

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2. Explain how these new skills will help you to contribute to improving policies or practices in your current or future job as a lecturer. Please be specific as possible, e.g. citing specific organizational plans, programmes or policies
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It will help me examine the dynamic and often risky nature of today’s financial markets and learn how to leverage data and information to guide the organization’s financial and other strategic decisions and wide spectrum of strategically important positions in finance. Most of the department in most organizations are not networked and not abreast with current financial policies that will maximize shareholders benefit so with the knowledge and skills acquired, I will organize seminars, training programs to brief them on the use of new trends and also bridge the gap between academic and corporate goals.

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3. Explain how this new skills and knowledge will help you contribute to your country’s development priorities. Please provide details, e.g. citing national plans, programmes or policies

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New leaders are going to be elected by Ghanaians and all presidential candidates are talking about free education and also how to improve the economy. The cedi also have depreciated in the financial market against other major currencies and my skills and knowledge will help me have insight about how to strengthen the currency against other currencies and also the new skill and knowledge that would be acquired will also equip me to be able to teach and lecturer in schools in the country.

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Question:
1. Explain what new skills and knowledge you expect to gain from the scholarship awards of Master of Science in Finance? Please be as specific as possible
Answers
I will learn rigorous and advanced intellectual training in banking, finance and economics on how to understand global financial industry that will sharpen my knowledge and provide me with all the advanced technical and analytical skills necessary to differentiate myself in the financial services marketplace in order to enhance career prospects in the field of finance and related areas. This does not seem specific enough to me. Is it?
Question:
2. Explain how these new skills will help you to contribute to improving policies or practices in your current or future job as a lecturer. Please be specific as possible, e.g. citing specific organizational plans, programmes or policies
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They will help me examine the dynamic and often risky nature of today’s financial markets and learn how to leverage data and information to guide the organization’s financial and other strategic decisions. Start a new sentence here and wide spectrum of strategically important positions in finance. Most of the departments in most organizations are not networked and not abreast of current financial policies that will maximize shareholders' benefits, so with the knowledge and skills acquired, I will organize seminars, training programs to brief them on the use of new trends and also bridge the gap between academic and corporate goals. Overall, you are talking in sentences that are too long, and you are mixing different thoughts together too much.

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3. Explain how this new skills and knowledge will help you contribute to your country’s development priorities. Please provide details, e.g. citing national plans, programmes or policies

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New leaders are going to be elected by Ghanaians and all presidential candidates are talking about free education and also how to improve the economy. The cedi also has depreciated in the financial market against other major currencies and my skills and knowledge will help me have insight about how to strengthen the currency against other currencies and also the new skill and knowledge that would be acquired will also equip me to be able to teach and lecturer in schools in the country
Overall, you are talking in sentences that are too long, and you are mixing different thoughts together too much.

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Question:
1. Explain what new skills and knowledge you expect to gain from the scholarship awards of Master of Science in Finance? Please be as specific as possible

Answers
I will learn rigorous and advanced intellectual training in banking, finance and economics on how to understand global financial industry that will sharpen my knowledge and provide me with all the advanced technical and analytical skills necessary to differentiate myself in the financial services marketplace in order to enhance career prospects in the field of finance and related areas. This does not seem specific enough to me. Is it? Please help me to be specific

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Could you please help me to answer this question?

1. After completing the scholarship (forest general study), how will you use your knowledge and skills acquired from Australia to improve your organization (e.g. division/ department/ Ministry) and the development of my country?

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Please describe how you expect to apply international relations skills and knowledge gained from this Award to improve policy or practices at your current or future job. Please be as specific as possible, e.g. citing specific

Organizational plans, programs or policies

They will help me examine the dynamic and often risky nature of today’s Agricultural markets and learn how to leverage information to guide the organization’s Agricultural and other strategic decisions. Most of the departments in most organizations are not networked and not abreast of current financial policies that will maximize shareholders' benefits, so with the knowledge and skills acquired, I will organize seminars, training programs to brief them on the use of new trends and also bridge the gap between academic and corporate goals. Overall, you are talking in sentences that are too long, and you are mixing different thoughts together too much.

list the skills and knowledge you expect to gain from this award, please be as specific as possible. eg by the end of my studies, i hope to have developed skills and knowledge