The line graph illustrates the value of Outokumpu firm in euros changed from January in 2006 to December in 2010.

A glance at the graph, it is clear that there was a fluctuation of price of Outokumpu companies in euros into the period.

At the beginning, on the January in 2006, the price of Outokumpu companies was about 13 euros. After that, there was a significantly development trend in value of Outokumpu firm and first time peaked at over 30 euros in early 2007. However, the figure of Outokumpu corporation in euros fluctuated and hit the highest point again at 30 euros in the middle of 2008.

Since then, the share value of Outokumpu companies in euros diminished sharply and reached the lowest point at 7 euros in the end 2008. In two-year period starting in 2009, there was an upward trend in price of Outokumpu firm and reached at 13 euros on December in 2010.

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The line graph illustrates (missing word) the value of Outokumpu firm (That is not what the chart shows.) in euros changed from January in 2006 to December in 2010.

A glance at the graph, it is clear that (Those words have no real meaningful content. We call them "filler" words. Save your word count for more significant ideas.) There was a fluctuation of (missing words) price of Outokumpu companies in euros into (wrong word) the period.

At the beginning, on the January in 2006, the price of Outokumpu companies was about 13 euros. (You wrote that someone could buy all these companies for 13 euros.) After that, there was a significantly development trend in value of Outokumpu firm and first time (That is not good English) peaked at over 30 euros in early 2007. However, the figure of Outokumpu corporation in euros fluctuated and hit the highest point again at 30 euros in the middle of 2008.

Since then, the share value of Outokumpu companies in euros diminished sharply and reached the lowest point at 7 euros in the end 2008. In (missing word) two-year period starting in 2009, there was an upward trend in price of Outokumpu firm and reached at 13 euros on December in 2010.

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