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Dear Ms. Jean Chin,
I saw your advert on the Web site of your company. We are a selling agent for the mobile phone. According to your ad, the satellite phone with model GBX 14 is currently available, So we are planning to buy this item to expand our business.
My customers love phones that are lightweight and slim. Therefore, Could you please give me information about Its weight and dimensions. As I know, the price of each phone is $1,348.95, so I would like to know whether we get a discount if we buy this product in bulk. We would also appreciate it if you could send some promotional information and samples of the materials so that we can examine the quality.
We hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,

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You capitalize words that should be all lowercase.


Dear Ms. Jean Chin,
I saw your advert on the Web site of your company. We are a selling agent for the many brands of mobile phones. According to your ad, the satellite phone with model GBX 14 is currently available, So we are planning to buy this item to expand our business.
My customers love phones that are lightweight and slim. Therefore, Could you please give me information about Its weight and dimensions. As I know, the price of each phone is $1,348.95, so I would like to know whether we can get a discount if we buy it this product in bulk. We would also appreciate it if you could send some promotional information and a samples of the materials so that we can examine the quality.


We hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,

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paint towel 512 Help me check this request letter.

Your request is incorrect. Consider these three sentences.

1) Please help me to carry my bags ( You carry the bags, but I assist you. )
2) Please carry my bags. (I carry the bags for you. )
3) Please help me by carrying my bags. (If I carry your bags, it will be good for you.)

1) Please help me check this request letter. (You check this request letter, but I assist. The web site does not allow this.)
2) Please check this request letter. ( I check this request letter and give you feedback. )
3) Please help me by checking this request letter. (I check your request letter and give you feedback. That will help you.)

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