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Hi everybody, would you help me correct this sentences, thanks

1. After all of the preparation are ready, I went to the tourism site which is located not really far from Yogyakarta's palace "KERATON" (is this sentence correct ?, should i use are or was befre the word ready ?)

2. The trip did not take a long time because the distance between Wirobrajan and Keraton where the Taman Sari Palace is situated was not really far, so it took about 10 minutes to 15 minutes.
(is this sentence correct ?)

3. which one is correct, Indonesian tourism, Indonesia's tourism or indonesia tourism ?

Really aprreciated for all of your help. thanks.
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Hi there...here are my suggestions for these 3 sentences:

1. After all the preparation was done, I went to the tourism site which is located not really far from Yogyakarta's palace "KERATON".

I would remove 'of' from the first part of this sentence because it is not necessary, and it is important that you use the past form of 'to be' before the past participle 'done' because you are talking a past situation. This is highlighted by the use of the past form 'went' in the following clause.

2. The sentence is correct. The only change I would make is that I would include a comma between 'Wirobrajan and Keraton' and 'where the ....' mainly because here you are giving additional information about the location.

3. It depends on the context in which you're using the phrase. To be on the safe side I would use the phrase 'tourism in Indonesia'

Hope this helps Emotion: smile

Bernice
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