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A couple is looking at each other in a picture and the caption to the photo is:

'Glance of mom-papa. At the moment of each other's glance.

Is this correct english? Is anything missing out in this sentence..? Please help me with this.
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The caption doesn't seem to read smoothly (or logically). Without seeing the photo, I would suggest something like: Mom and Pop catch each other's eyes.
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Thanks Philip. Even I had similar doubts about it. A caption should be as easy and comprehensive to catch attention in one read only and people shouldnt put much of their brains in cracking what the caption really means. Is their any way we can improvise on the original caption.