Can any1 evaluate my Cover Letter for VISA and plz help me in making a better one.
The German Consulate,
Subject: Request for Student visa to Germany.
My name is Zubair. I completed my undergraduate from Osmania University, India in 2008, majoring in Electronics & Communication Engineering. After completion of my under-graduation in Electronics & Communication Engineering, I worked with WIPRO and then SITEL- INDIA as an "Analyst" where my work mainly involves interacting with our United States Customers for any correspondence in webhosting.
I subsequently developed an interest in German language and their culture. I have been studying basic German language at Goethe Institute. By doing German, it will increase my level of communication skills, as I plan to do my Masters in Communication at Technical University of Hamburg. TUHH is one of the renowned universities in Germany hence it would give me cutting edge in future. During my stay at German my father has agreed to support me financially.
Below are the lists of doc that I have attached to my visa application.
1. Visa application.
2. College letter.
3. University certificate.
4. TOEFL SCORE.
5. Financial documents.
7. Copy of passport.
8. Goethe institute certificate for learning German A1 course.
Once again, I would like to humbly request you to consider my application and grant me a student visa for pursuing my Masters in Germany.
P.S: I also need to translate this in German language ones im done wit the cover letter in English I will work on it.
From: S K Zubair, Hyderabad
Subject: Request for Student Visa to Germany
I completed my bachelor's degree at Osmania University, India, in 2008, majoring in Electronics & Communication Engineering. Subsequently, I worked for WIPRO and then SITEL- INDIA as an analyst, where my work mainly involved interacting with our United States customers via webhost correspondence.
I developed an interest in the German language and culture, and I have been studying German at Goethe Institute. By learning German, I will increase my range of communication skills, and I plan to do my Masters in Communication at Technical University of Hamburg. TUHH is one of the most prestigious universities in Germany, and it will give me a rung up to the cutting edge of the future. During my stay in Germany, my father has agreed to support me financially.
Below is a list of the documents that I have attached to my visa application:
1. Visa application form
2. Letter from college
3. University diploma
4. TOEFL score
5. Financial documents
7. Copy of passport
8. Goethe Institute certificate for German A1 course
I humbly request you to consider my application and grant me a student visa to pursue my master's degree in Germany.
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