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Some believe that more academic subjects such as chemistry, physics and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking. Discuss both views and provide your own opinion with relevant examples.

In education institutions has been putting more emphasis on training academic and practical courses. Both areas have its own merits.

There are some obvious benefits when studying academic courses such as chemistry, physics and history. Firstly, these courses are of crucial importance to each student. This mean that they are equipped with fundamental knowledge in order to have an access higher education. Secondly, these courses are necessary for important jobs. It is impossible you can become doctors, teachers and so on without have relevant knowledge. Undoubtedly, these jobs demand that we must be fluent in academic theories. Furthermore, which is beneficial to decent job and handsome salary. For example, to become competitive in the job market which studying higher school to acquire knowledge is of milestone stage to foster their careers.

However, it is not denied that there are some benefits of practical course. The first advantage is that these courses are beneficial to the majority of people. Since, they want to make a living as soon as possible without coming 4 years at college which helping them raise a family easier by manual jobs. The second merit could be seen that these courses have positive impacts on the society. In fact, lack of blue collars for jobs.

In addition, many companies place more emphasis on workers who have solid practical experience. For instance, in hotel manager or any fields always have training courses help employee feel confident before official works.

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Some believe that more academic subjects such as chemistry, physics and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking. Discuss both views and provide your own opinion with relevant examples.


In education institutions (This is a prepositional phrase. It cannot serve as the subject of a sentence.) has been putting more emphasis on training academic and practical courses. Both areas have its (wrong form. You need plural for "areas") own merits. (Your first paragraph is incomplete. You need a thesis statement. You need to follow the instructions: provide your own opinion.)

There are some obvious benefits when studying academic courses such as chemistry, physics and history. Firstly, First, these courses are of crucial importance to each student. This mean that they are equipped with fundamental knowledge in order to have an access to higher education. Secondly, Second, these courses are necessary for important jobs. It is impossible for you to can become doctors, teachers and so on without have relevant knowledge. Undoubtedly, these jobs demand that we must be fluent in academic theories. Furthermore, which is beneficial to decent job and handsome salary. (That is not a sentence, but a fragment. The problem is "which.") For example, to become competitive in the job market which studying higher school to acquire knowledge is of milestone stage to foster their careers.(ungrammatical)

However, it is not denied that there are some benefits of taking practical courses. The first advantage is that these courses are beneficial to the majority of people. Since, (This begins a dependent clause. You should not begin a new sentence.) they want to make a living as soon as possible without coming (wrong word) 4 (Do not use numerals for small numbers in a formal essay. Write the number in words.) years at college which helping (wrong word) them raise a family easier by manual jobs. The second merit could be seen that these courses have positive impacts on the society. In fact, lack of blue collars for jobs. (fragment, not a complete sentence)

In addition, many companies place more emphasis on workers who have solid practical experience. For instance, in hotel manager or any fields always have training courses help employee feel confident before official works.

(Your essay is not complete. It has no concluding paragraph. If you want a good score, you must write these paragraphs:

1. Opening paragraph with a thesis statement that answers the topic question. For example: Both academic and practical courses are important for high school students, so I believe that there should be two types of high school, one focusing on vocational training and another focusing on college preparatory courses.

2. Body paragraphs. Each paragraph supports on point. Give personal examples in these paragraphs. Your essay did not have any personal experiences.

3. Conclusion. Do not write new things here.Just make a summary of your points and tell the reader your opinion again.

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