Dear BIRD,
Are you fine?I'm fine.:-)Long time never see you.Are you free next Saturday?Would you like to go out for lunch with me then?I like KFC.I remember that you like KFC,too.How about KFC at the Mall?Let me know before Saturday.In the end,Hope to see you.And don't forget to take care yourself.:-D
Best regards
MOD

Hi MOD,
Thanks for the email.I'm fine.I am happy to receive an e-mail from you.I miss [email protected]^_^@ I'm free. I always go with you.I'd love to go out for lunch with you on Saturday.I like KFC but I've just had KFC with my sister last week.-_-'' Let's get some icecremat Swensen.Swensen has a special menu this week.If it's ok for you,I will meet you at Swensen.See you then.
Kinddest
BIRD

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Posted: Dec 9, 1:55 PM [GMT 0]
Post Subject: [url="/English/Post/zgxkp/Post.htm#451314"]Re: Help me.check my a casual e-mail message.[/url]
Post author: [url="/user/wqcl/profile.htm"]Jajar[/url]
Thanks for help .
Plese check my grammar .I will write it wrong or correct.please check my work.

write a personnal e-mail to friend asking if he 0r she would like
to go out for lunch with you next saturday.In your e-mail indicate
the kind of food and the restaurant you would like to go.


Dear,BIRD

Are you fine?I'm fine.Are you free time next saturday?
Would you like to go out for lunch with me next Saturday?
I like KFC.I remember that you like KFC,too
How about KFC at mall?
Tell me before Saturday. See you.
.........................................................................................................
-replies the e-mail accepting the invitation but you can request or sugguest
any changes about the food and places to go.

Hi,MOD
I'm fine.I am happy to received e-mail from you.I miss you
I'd love to go out for lunch with you on Saturday.I like KFC but
I've just had KFC with my sister last week.Let's get some icecrem
at Swensen.Swensen has a special menu this week.If it's ok for you,
I meet you at Swensen. Mall at 9 am,Saturday.But if you don'tl ike
the idea just tell and we can arrange for our Saturday lunch.
See you.

...........................................................................................................
JajarPlese check my grammar .I will write it wrong or correct.please check my work.

write a personal e-mail to friend asking if he 0r she would like
to go out for lunch with you next Saturday.In your e-mail indicate
the kind of food and the restaurant you would like to go to.


Dear,BIRD No comma betweeen Dear and name - comma after name.


Are you fine?I'm fine.Are you free time next Saturday?
Would you like to go out for lunch with me then?
I like KFC.I remember that you like KFC,too
How about KFC at mall?at the Mall/in the Mall
Tell Let me know before Saturday. See you.


Insert one space after punctuation.

.........................................................................................................
-replies the e-mail accepting the invitation but you can request or sugguest
any changes about the food and places to go.

Hi,MOD
I'm fine.I am happy to receive an e-mail from you.I miss you
I'd love to go out for lunch with you on Saturday.I like KFC but
I've just had KFC with my sister last week.Let's get some icecrem
at Swensen.Swensen has a special menu this week.If it's ok for you,
I will meet you at Swensen. Mall at 9 am,Saturday.But if you don'tl ike
the idea just tell me and we can arrange for our Saturday lunch.
See you.

...........................................................................................................
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Thanks for help .please check it again

Dear BIRD,
Are you fine?I'm fine.:-)Long time never see you.Are you free next Saturday?Would you like to go out for lunch with me then?I like KFC.I remember that you like KFC,too.How about KFC at the Mall?Let me know before Saturday.In the end,Hope to see you.And don't forget to take care yourself.:-D
Best regards
MOD

Hi MOD,
Thanks for the email.I'm fine.I am happy to receive an e-mail from you.I miss [email protected]^_^@ I'm free. I always go with you.I'd love to go out for lunch with you on Saturday.I like KFC but I've just had KFC with my sister last week.-_-'' Let's get some icecremat Swensen.Swensen has a special menu this week.If it's ok for you,I will meet you at Swensen.See you then.
Kinddest
BIRD
Jajar, please make sure you hit "reply" and not "report."

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JajarThanks for help .please check it again

Dear BIRD,
Are you fine?I'm fine.:-)Long time never see you.Are you free next Saturday?Would you like to go out for lunch with me then?I like KFC.I remember that you like KFC,too.How about KFC at the Mall?Let me know before Saturday.In the end,Hope to see you.And don't forget to take care yourself.:-D
Best regards
MOD

Hi MOD,
Thanks for the email.I'm fine.I am happy to receive an e-mail from you.I miss [email protected]^_^@ I'm free. I always go with you.I'd love to go out for lunch with you on Saturday.I like KFC but I've just had KFC with my sister last week.-_-'' Let's get some icecremat Swensen.Swensen has a special menu this week.If it's ok for you,I will meet you at Swensen.See you then.
Kinddest
BIRD
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