My english is till bad so please help me to correct it

Subject: advantages and disadvantages of living in the country

Living in the country is something that people from the city often dream about. However, in reality, it has both its advantages and disadvantages.

There are certainly many advantages to living in the country. This is the place for people enjoy their holiday in peace with their family. Everything is quiet and you can have a good time to relax. You can image that you lie down on the grassplot, close your eyes, feel the nature around you and you don’t need to worry about anything. Another thing will make you more comfortable is the people. They are very friendly and they make me laugh everywhere with their funny story. My young brother and sister are like this place too. They play around all day and my family doesn’t worry too much about them because the traffic is very good and everyone doesn’t run too fast.

However, there are certain drawbacks to life outside the city. Sometimes, you feel that is really quiet. You feel boring because too less people and you don’t have friends to talk. Soon, you will find out that the entertainment is very difficult to find and the only thing you can do at night is go to bed. The shops and services is less too. It is not easy for you to find a job there and when you have a job, it’s still hard for you to travel a long way to work because this is too expensive.

In conclusion, it can be seen that the country is more suitable for some people than others. Moreover, it is often best place for those who are retired or who have young children. On the other hand, young, single people who have a career are better provided for in the city.
Living in the country is something that most people from the living in the cities often dream about. However, in reality, it has both its advantages and disadvantages.

There are certainly many advantages to of living in the country. This It is the a place for people to enjoy their holiday in peace with their family. Everything is quiet and you can have a good time enough time to relax/ you can have a good time while having the chance to relax at the same time. You can image that imagine while you lie down on the grassplot, close your eyes, feel the nature around you and you don’t need to worry about anything. Another thing which will make you more comfortable is the people. They are very friendly and they make me laugh everywhere with their funny stories. My young brother and sister are like this place, too. They play around all day and my family doesn’t worry too much about for them because the traffic is very good secure and because everyone doesn’t run no one drives too fast.

However, there are certain drawbacks to life live outside the city, too. Sometimes, you feel that everything is really so quiet. You feel boring bored because too less there are not many people around and you don’t have friends to talk. Soon, you will find out that the entertainment is very difficult to find and the only thing you can do at night is to go to bed. The shops and services is less. There aren't enough shops and services, too either.. It is not easy for you to find a job there and when you have a job, it’s still hard for you to travel a long way go to work from home because this it is too expensive.

In conclusion, it can be seen understood that the country is more suitable for some people than the others. Moreover, it is often best place for those who are retired or who have young children. On the other hand, it is better for young and single people who have a career are better provided for in the city to live in the city.
Thank you, It's funny that the first and the last paragraphs was writen by my teacher and you correct it Emotion: smile,anyway thanks
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Thank you, it is funny that the first and the second paragraphs were writen by my teacher to help me and you correct it Emotion: smile, anyway thanks
The first and second paragraphs were fine as they were.

On the other hand, it is better for young and single people who have a career are better provided for in the city to live in the city. - This changes the meaning of the sentence. This sentence is now making a judgement on whether single people should live in the city or the country. The original sentence just says that the city has better 'facilities/opportunities' for their careers.
My English is still bad so please help me to correct it

Subject: advantages and disadvantages of living in the country

Living in the country is something that people from the city often dream about. However, in reality, it has both its advantages and disadvantages.

There are certainly many advantages to living in the country. This is the place where people spend their holiday peacefully with their family. Everything is quiet and you can have a good time and relax. You picture yourself lying down on the green grass, with your eyes closed, surrounded by nature, feeling nature, you forget yourworries, you have nothing to worry about. Moreover you will feel more comfortable with the people you are surrounded by bacause in smal places people know each other, we are not stranger as the inhabitants of big cities are. These friendly people make me laugh a lot with their great stories. My younger brother and sister also like this place. They play around all day and my family doesn’t have to worry too much about them because traffic is not a problem, it is safer bacause for instance people don´t speed. (me parece un poco utópico pero bueno, aporto mi grano de arena, no sé si me equivovo pero me da q esto lo ha escrito alguien cuya lengua materna es el castellano. Se me he colado pido disculpas)

However, there are certain drawbacks to life outside the city. Sometimes, you feel that it is too quiet. You may be bored (a person feels or is bored and things are boring) because there are too people and you don’t have many friends to talk to. Soon (this is kind of a strange connector!), you will find out that there is little entertainment and the only thing you can do at nighttime is go to bed. There are less shops and facilities. Finding a job isn´t easy, if you work far awya you will wast time and money commuting.

In conclusion, life in the country is more suitable for some people than for others. Moreover, it is often the best (use "the" with a superlative) place for those who are retired or who have young children. On the other hand, young single people who have a career are better off living in the city.

You should have made a list with the advantages and disadvantages first. I don´t agree with your first statement, How many people from the city want to run off to the countryside?!
Advantages of living in the city:
More job options, more places to entertain ourselves, better schools for our children.
Disadvantages of living in the city:
Pollution, traffic jams, kind of cold not knowing everyone around you (though most of us have eally noisy neighbours how know too much about us!)
Get more pros and cons from living in the country just as I did above with living in the city.

My final thought is that your conclusion is a bit short but all in all it is a pretty good essay. Keep up the good work. Oh! I also corrected "help correct"
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Well nice correction i think i should use this in future to remove the mistakes. This is amazing
You are welcome! Was I right about your mother tongue being Spanish?!!
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