What is needed in order to succeed: talents one is born with or desire to work hard? Which of these two views do you prefer? Provide detailed rationale for your choice.

Nowadays, there are many people who can achieve success in many ways. Some of them are lucky to have been talented since they were born. Some of them desire to work hard to bring them success. I would prefer to work hard to become successful.


First, working hard helps people appreciate what they have. Indeed, if a person has to work hard to receive good results, they will realize the difficulty of the process of working for it. For example, when I was a high school student, I really liked Apple's smartphones but I did have much money at that time. I decided to work part-time to get/earn money to buy it. I had to work a couple of part-time jobs after school hours. I was exhausted but I kept working hard for a long time. After a year, I was able to have my own favorite phone. I was excited and appreciated the phone. Until now, I still use and preserve it carefully.


Second, achieving success after a hard-working time helps people become their better version.

If people have to go through a hard time of difficulties to achieve success, they have a tendency to become modest. Instead of going out and bragging about their success, they will be humble and kind. For example, there are many billionaires in the world who achieve their success by themselves like Mark Zuckerberg, BillGate and so on. All of them have a simple style, they do not wear luxury brands. Besides, they help the poor in the world instead of showing off their wealth. A long time of working hard helps them become their best version.


To sum up, desiring to work hard to become successful helps people appreciate the value of achievement. Also, working hard makes people become their best version. I strongly prefer the view that people need to go through hard-working time to receive good results.

Nowadays, there are many people who can achieve success in many ways. Some of them are lucky to have natural talents. been talented since they were born. Some of them the desire to work hard to bring and that brings them success. I would prefer someone that works to work hard to become successful. (It is not asking about yourself - if you personally have innate talents. It is asking in general.)


First, working hard helps people appreciate what they have. Indeed, if a person has to work hard to receive good results, they will realize the difficulty in of the process of working for it. For example, when I was a high school student, I really liked Apple's smartphones but I did have much money (If you had money, why didn't you just buy one?) at that time. I decided to work part-time to get/earn money to buy it. I had to work a couple of part-time jobs after school hours. I was exhausted but I kept working hard for a long time. After a year, I was able to have my own favorite phone. I was excited and appreciated the phone. Until Even now, I still use and preserve handle it carefully.


Second, achieving success after a hard-working time (unnatural) expending a lot of effort helps people become their better version. (Do not start a new paragraph.)

If people have to go through a hard time of difficulties to achieve success, it teaches them to be they have a tendency to become modest. Instead of going out and bragging about their success, they will be humble and kind. For example, there are many billionaires in the world who achieve their success by themselves like Mark Zuckerberg, BillGate and so on. (Do not use "and so on" in formal writing) All of them have a simple style, (comma splice error) they do not wear luxury brands. Besides, they help the poor in the world instead of showing off their wealth. A long time of working hard helps them become their best version.


To sum up, desiring to work hard to become successful helps people appreciate the value of their achievements. Also, working hard makes people become their best version. I strongly prefer the view that people need to have the determination and perseverance to exert an effort go through hard-working time to receive good results.

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