The pie charts compare the proportion of water usage in terms of different categories in San Diego County, California and worldwide.

It is obvious that households in San Diego County consume a considerably higher proportion of water than that in California and Worldwide. People in the world use the lowest percentage of water for accommodation but the highest proportion for Agriculture.

In San Diego County, residential sector accounts for 60% of the total water usage. This is 21% higher than the proportion of water consumption in California, and 52% more than the percentage in the world. People in the world use nearly a third of total water for industry (33%), while the figures for San Diego County and California are exactly the same in both regions, 23%.

In terms of Agriculture, the percentage of water use in worldwide is four times as high as that in San Diego County, at 69% and 17% respectively. Finally, in California the smallest water use is for Agriculture, at 28%.

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The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the worldwide

The pie charts compare the proportion of water usage in terms of different categories in San Diego County, California and worldwide.

It is obvious that households in San Diego County consume a considerably higher proportion of water than that in California and Worldwide. People in the world use the lowest percentage of water for accommodation but the highest proportion for Agriculture.

In San Diego County, residential sector accounts for 60% of the total water usage. This is 21% higher than the proportion of water consumption in California, and 52% more than the percentage in the world. People in the world use nearly a third of total water for industry (33%), while the figures for San Diego County and California are exactly the same in both regions, 23%.

In terms of Agriculture, the percentage of water use in worldwide is four times as high as that in San Diego County, at 69% and 17% respectively. Finally, in California the smallest water use is for Agriculture, at 28%.

The pie charts compare the proportion of water usage in terms of different categories in San Diego County, California and worldwide. (Comment: This exercise is very tricky because San Diego County is in the state of California. Its longer proper name is "San Diego County, California." So when you write "San Diego County, California and worldwide," you are writing about 2, not 3, places.)

It is obvious that Households in San Diego County consume a considerably higher proportion of water than that (improper antecedent agreement) in California and Worldwide. People in the world use the lowest percentage of water for accommodation (incorrect usage) but the highest proportion for Agriculture.

In San Diego County, (missing word) residential sector accounts for 60% of the total water usage. This is 21% higher than the proportion of water consumption in California, and 52% more than the percentage in the world. People in the world use nearly a third of total water for industry (33%), while the figures for San Diego County and California are exactly the same in both regions, 23%.

In terms of Agriculture, the percentage of water use in worldwide is four times as high as that in San Diego County, at 69% and 17% respectively. Finally, in California the smallest water use is for Agriculture, at 28%.

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thank you for your help,

-Can you give me some words which have the same meaning with residental?

-the sentence " Households in San Diego County consume a considerably higher proportion of water than that (improper antecedent agreement) in California and Worldwide"

how can i correct it?, replace "that" with other word or just remove it?