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Dear User,

Thank you for your email.

If I read correctly, you have requested to 1) upgrade the car booking system and 2) a new web-base package for car booking, security updates etc. For request 1, it is expected to take 8 hrs maximum to update your requirement within the car booking system. This work is easy and quick which can be started immediately. Hope you will get the updated version by end of next week. For your information I have already started this work. But another request can not be done within one month or so as I am busy on other office commitments. Whenever I am free, I will let you know and discuss about its requirement.

Hope this help you.
Dear User,

Thank you for your email.

If I understand correctly, you have requested to (1) upgrade the car booking system and (2) receive a new web-base package for car booking, security updates, etc. For request 1, it is expected to take 8 hrs maximum to update your requirement within the car booking system. This work is easy and quick, and can be started immediately. You should receive the updated version by the end of next week. For your information, I have already started this work. However, your second request cannot be accomplished within one month or so, because I am currrently busy on other office commitments. As soon as I am free, I will let you know and we can discuss its requirements.

Hope this helps you. Please let me know if you have further concerns.
Thanks Guru Mister Micawber.