Hi all,

Can somebody please help me with the English?
Regards,
Fizzi

Before continuing my studies, I used to work as a doctor in a government hospital, clinics and multinational companies. Following that, I have been given a full scholarship with salary by a university and X government to work on my PhD studies. Upon completing my studies, I will continue working as a lecturer in the university. With the experience and connection with people in government, business and academic sectors, it has equipped me to become a good ambassador for California. On top of that, as my research activities and writing career develop, California will always be with me, as it is the place where everything begins.
Hi Fizzi,

Before continuing my studies, I worked as a doctor in a government hospital, and in clinics and multinational companies. Following that, I won a full scholarship, with salary, from BBBBB university and the X government, to work on my PhD. Upon completing this, I will continue working as a lecturer in the university. My experience and connections with people in government, business and academic sectors have equipped me to become a good ambassador for California. On top of that, as my research activities and writing career develop, California will always be with me, as it is the place where everything begins.

Best wishes, Clive
Thanks Clive,
Cheers,
Fizzi