Dear friends,

I am arranged to write the company profile of us. But, as a non-native speaker, I am afraid my english is not good enough to write an attractive company profile. I appriaciated anyone's help here.

COMPANY TITLE was created in 2004 by private investors as a professional supplier of furniture & decoration board, locates in Foshan. We supply E1/E2 Grade MDF, Particle Board, Slatwall, Sound Insulation Board to furniture manufacturers, decoration companies, contractors, traders etc. 12 hot-press machines ensure we have enough capacity to deliver in time. Independent printing factory ensures we can design any color according to customer’s requirement. Our good quality and competitive price have won many clients for us in USA, Europe and Middle East.

And, welcome to visit our company's website when it is ready to run.

Many thanks!

Jing, 2006/12/19 Tuesday, China
JingDear friends,

I am arranged to write the company profile of us. But, as a non-native speaker, I am afraid my english is not good enough to write an attractive company profile. I appriaciated anyone's help here.

COMPANY TITLE was created in 2004 by private investors as a professional supplier of furniture and decoration board, located in Foshan. We supply E1/E2 Grade MDF, Particle Board, Slatwall, and Sound Insulation Board to furniture manufacturers, decoration [interior design] companies, contractors, traders etc. 12 hot-press machines ensure we have enough capacity to deliver in time. Independent printing factory ensures we can design any color according to customer’s requirement. Our good quality and competitive price have won many clients for us in the USA, Europe and Middle East.

You are welcome to visit our company's website when it is ready to run.

Many thanks!

Jing, 2006/12/19 Tuesday, China
The sentence about the printing factory is unclear. Is this factory part of your set-up or a company that you use? Is the printing being done on the surfaces of the various boards you produce? Would this sentence be better this way:

We can produce our boards in any color to the customer's requirement, using [an/our] independent printing factory.

Apart from that and the other minor alterations, you have written good clean bit of English.
The printing factory belongs to our own company. In fact, we are a group company. We have 3 independent factories. The printing factory is one of the group company.

Maybe I should write like this : Our own independent printing factory ensures we can design any color to customer's requirement. Is it clear to readers?
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I am unhappy about "design any color", which would mean that you are creating a new color. Are you printing onto the surface of the board?

In which case - we can apply any design or color to the customer's specification.
Hi,

Why is it unnecessary to have any articles for the underlined parts of the sentence "We supply E1/E2 Grade MDF, Particle Board, Slatwall, and Sound Insulation Board to funiture manufacturers, decoration companies, contractors, traders, etc."?

Sorry I couldn't make 1 and 2 of E1 and E2 smaller to quote as it should.

Minor comment:

Did he write a good clean bit of English or good clean bit of English.

I am not trying to ruffle the feather but just want to know.