Hi everyone

I need some help arround the LoM.

Thanks to all of you.

Agron

Dear Ms ***

With this letter I would like to express my interest for the position of Marketing *** advertised on the Company1’s website. Knowing the reputation of your company, I am highly interested in pursuing the career of Marketing *** with Company1.

I am a graduate of the commercial college. Because of the wars in the former Yugoslavia, I had to leave the University where I was studying foreign languages and history. When I took refuge in Switzerland, I worked on the different jobs in the Gastronomy and I studied Economics & Informatics in Lucerne. After that I careful thought and consideration, I decided to undergo a career change. Few years a go I put my steps in the tourisms industry. I did a tour operating for the Chinese tourists.

During my education, it has always been the Marketing courses which attracted me mostly. What attract me to the field of Marketing are the challenges involved. Challenge is what motivates me. The more complex the problem, the more motivated I am to solve it, and the more motivated I am, the more positive the outcome.

My long-term goal is to be specialized in the Tourisms industry. I realize this will take a few years to achieve, but I am willing to put my time and energy into it, because I have finally found something that I will truly enjoy. I believe that being part of the division of *** at Company1 will be a major factor in achieving my goals by giving me hands on experience and training in the field. Company1 particularly interests me, because it is the most successful and the largest *** *** company.

Through living in Switzerland and growing up in former Yugoslavia, I have become fluent in English, German, Italian, Croatian and Albanian (French and Spanish basic). For these reasons I am entirely capable of integrating and working in a multicultural environment such as Company1.

Company1 represents the perfect environment for a young motivated man who wishes to make a career in the tourisms industry. Company1 also embraces values to which I can relate and in which I can further enhance my skills. Company1's international position also represents an opportunity and an experience that I would like to be part of.

Thank you for your time and consideration and I hope my application will be successful. I am happy to answer any supplementary questions you might have.

Sincerely,

Agron ***
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Hi everyone

I need some help arround the LoM.

Thanks to all of you.

Agron

Dear Ms ***

First of all, I would like to express my interest for the position of Marketing *** advertised on the Company1’s website. Knowing the reputation of your company, I am highly keen on ( since "interest" has been used in front, choosing another word is much recommended ) pursuing the career as Marketing *** with Company1.

I am a graduate from a commercial college. Because of the wars in the former Yugoslavia, I had to leave the University where I was studying foreign languages and history. When I took refuge in Switzerland, I took on different jobs in Gastronomy and I studied Economics & Informatics in Lucerne. After doing some thorough assessment and consideration, I decided to go for a career change. Few years ago I worked as a travel guide for the Chinese tourists.

During my education, it has always been the Marketing courses that attracted me the most. It is the challenges involved that I was being drawn to the Marketing field. Challenge is what motivates me. The more complex the problem, the more motivated I will be to deal with it. And the more motivated I become, the more positive the outcome as a result.

My long-term goal is to specialize in the Tourisms industry. I realize that this will take a few years to achieve, but I am willing to put my time and energy into it, because I have finally found something that I truly enjoy. I believe that being part of the division of *** at Company1 will be a major factor in achieving my goals where I got the chance to get hands-on experience and training in the field. Company1 really gets my attention, because it is the most successful and the largest *** *** company.

I am proficient in English, German, Italian, Croatian and Albanian (French and Spanish basic)after years living in Switzerland and growing up in former Yugoslavia, . For these reasons I believe that I am entirely capable of integrating and working in a multicultural environment such as Company1.

Company1 is the perfect place for a young man with motivation who wishes to make a career in the tourisms industry. Company1 also embraces values to which I can relate. And it is a conducive environment where I can further enhance my skills. Company1's international position also represents an opportunity and an experience that I would like to be part of.

Thank you for your time and consideration and I hope my application will be successful. I am happy to answer any supplementary questions you might have.

Sincerely,

Agron ***
Maye I should be more clear. Could you please have a look at it and maybe correct it or give nay suggestions.

Thanks

Agron
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If I would write instead of "interested", "motivated" does it sound better?
interested in pursuing is fine Emotion: smile