well guys, I dont even know what to say this so let me clarify what I want. I visited my client in newyork some where back in june (over 1 1/2 month) and I am leaving back home in next couple of days.

So I want to write an email addressing to the people with whom i worked with to say thank you and good bye (well i am just leaving back to offshore not leaving the company Emotion: smile)

i am not very good in writing this kind of mails and infact i never wrote any such thing before. I need you guys help in this. I should be saying thanks for inviting me here (onsite) and something like it was great experiecne working with you guys (client) and i am looking forward for comming back to onsite and blah blah.

hope you understand,

and also , pls suggest a good subject Emotion: smile
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Why don't you write something first and post it here then we can discuss.
mmm

I have a phobia, I am not confident enough to start. Emotion: sad

I always panic while I communicate with foreign clients, I can talk on technical discursions (i am s/w engr.) but not on any general subject.
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You are not alone in this situation Emotion: smile. You've got to show people what you write then a lengthy discussion can begin about your writing.
Okey, here is the mail i prepared with difficulty, please suggest if this can be made more shorter and more decent or any advice you can give.

Please respond urgently I have to send it in next few hours

Sub: Thank you (can there be any other subject i can use)

It is my pleasure to be here and work closely with you all. In past 6 weeks I learnt many new things and I sure this helps me to contribute more to the team in the future assignments.

Time went so fast that it’s hard to believe that I stayed with you here for almost 2 months. I had really wonderful time here in New York and I am looking forward to see you again soon.

Its time to signoff, Once again I thank you for all your help and cooperation

Regards,

Abc
Hello Ing,

Just a couple of adjustments:

Sub: Thank you

It has been a pleasure to be here and work closely with you all. In the past 6 weeks I've learnt many new things and I am sure this will help me to contribute more to the team in future assignments.

Time went so fast that it’s hard to believe that I stayed with you here for almost 2 months. I had a really wonderful time here in New York and I am looking forward to seeing you again soon.

It's time to sign off. Once again I thank you for all your help and cooperation.

Regards,

Abc

MrP
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Thanks MrP

Is there any thing else i change here

>>>It's time to sign off. Once again I thank you for all your help and cooperation.

Is it okey to put something like this

"I am sad to say bye" and continue saying something which should be more deplomatic/official than too personal.

can you guys add some more lines?

Overall, how was the email i prepared

do you guys any advice to improve it
Hello Ing,

I think it's fine as it is. I wouldn't change it too much – it's best to keep these things spontaneous.

MrP
Thank you very much
I appriciate your help
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