Would you please help me and correct the paragraph below if it have some erros... thanks a lot


Summery

In this article after getting familiarity with base concepts of data mining and presenting definitions and current concepts, uncertainly and other bugs of nowadays models and problems which these ways of data mining would find reviewed, and "Bisary Mediation" (BMA) method from models in Bisary case as a powerful method in modeling field containing proper features for data mining applications presented and indicated that this method comparing to usual methods, especially in data mining applications have higher efficiency.
Hi,

You need to go through this and divide it into separate sentences. Without that, it is impossible to understand.

Make sure each sentence has a clear subject and verb, and object if required.

So, please revise and repost it.

Best wishes, Clive
Thanks a lot

Summery

In this article first we get familiarity with base concepts of data mining. The article presents definitions and current concepts (should this word replaced with some word else, because we already have a "concept" word in first line... what is the word?). It reviews uncertainly and other bugs of nowadays models and problems(? another word can be better?) which these ways of data mining would find. "Bisary Mediation" (BMA) method from models in Bisary case as a powerful method in modeling field containing proper features for data mining applications presented. By comparing to usual methods, indicated that this method, especially in data mining applications have higher efficiency.

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Summary

In this article we first become familiar with the basic principles of data mining. The article presents definitions and current concepts.

.It reviews uncertainly and other bugs of current models and problems(? another word can be better?) which these ways of data mining find.

"Bisary Mediation" (BMA) method from models in Bisary case as a powerful method in modeling field containing proper features for data mining applications presented.

By comparing to usual methods, indicated that this method, especially in data mining applications have higher efficiency.
Clive
You have some special formatting features in use with this post that are preventing me from typing my reply

Sorry! but I don't know what's the problem... Moderators should guid me, please... Is it my computer's fault or it's from site?
Hi,

No-one else seems to have this problem. Are you pasting your words into the post, or typing them directly?

Can you try doing it from another computer?

Clive
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