Can someone please check my English please?
If there's something wrong (grammar mistake, some incorrect verbs or wrong construction of a prase), could you please correct it for me?
I'm making a video on YouTube, so you'll see the result once I know the text is correct and I upload the video! Emotion: wink
Thanks in advance for your time and kindness!

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It is a period of high recession on planet Earth.
Prices all over the vast planet have risen to unbearable levels,
the economy is falling and the humans seamed to have lost all hopes.
But there’s sparking light at the end of the tunnel, and that
is the shinning XYZ’s site: a new enhanced site version with tons
of computer products, blank disks, office and audio/video equipment
and a lot more, all at your grasps at incredible affordable prices.
XYZ is the new elite rebel group that is successfully fighting against
the Galactic Recession Empire.
They are the fastest, strongest, and highest trained team force on
the planet and they will help you and get you what you need with
your total satisfaction. Log on the new XYZ and
may the force be with you…
Hi,

Here are a few edits.

It is a period of high recession on planet Earth.
Prices all over this vast planet have risen to unbearable levels,
the economy is failing and people seem to have lost all hope.
But there’s sparking light at the end of the tunnel, and that
is the shining XYZ site: a new enhanced version with tons
of computer products, blank disks, office and audio/video equipment
and a lot more, all at your grasp at incredible affordable prices.
XYZ is the new elite rebel group that is successfully fighting against
the Galactic Recession Empire.
They are the fastest, strongest, and highest trained force on
the planet .They will help you and get you what you need, with
your total satisfaction. Log on the new XYZ and
may the force be with you…

Don't forget to tell us the YouTube link.

Best wishes, Clive
Thank you very much for your reply and help. I appriciate it. Emotion: smile

Unfortunately I already found help therefore the video is already on youtube. Emotion: stick out tongue

I said "unfortunately" since your intervention is better then the one I received.

Anyway, thank again!

Here's the link:

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P.S. Just to make it clear, this is not spam since I'm in no way affiliated with that site, and the video is just my entry to a contest. Emotion: smile