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I wrote an essay task 2 IELTS exam about advantages and disadvantages of using electric cars.

In recent days, there has been a growing tendency people should use electric cars. Although some benefits can be seen from the phenomenon, the drawbacks are more significant

On the one hand, the potential advantages of utilizing electric cars. One of the main benefits is that there will protect the environment which leads to improving air pollution problems. This is because electric cars don't release harmful gas and fumes like gas-fueled vehicles. This means humans can solve global warming. Another benefit is that drivers can save their money. As a result, most electric cars are installed solar power panels to provide monetary energy on sunny weather. Owner electric cars will not pay for gas or oil bills.

On the other hand, there are several drawbacks of that people drive electrics cars. Firstly, electric cars have limitations such as speed, power of the battery, and functions. For example, A popular electric car is Tesla, the owner have to wait about 4 to 5 hours to charge full of its battery while normal gas-powered cars were charged about 10 minutes in a gas station and electric car drive lower speed than. Secondly, electric cars are more expensive. A main typical example of this, the price of electric cars is higher 2 times than common cars and people have to pay a lot of taxes.

In conclusion, it appears to me that the merits of electric cars are more notable than its drawbacks. If the government authorities implement reduce taxed for manufacturing electrics car, it will provide a chance for companies to update electrics car functions and many drivers are appeal to their



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In recent days, there has been a growing tendency people should use electric cars. (Ungrammatical. I cannot make a suggestion on how to correct it without the instructions.) Although some benefits can be seen from this the phenomenon, (incorrect word) the drawbacks are more significant (missing punctuation.)

On the one hand, the potential advantages of driving utilizing electric cars. (That is a noun phrase. There is no verb, so it is not a sentence.) One of the main benefits is that there (wrong pronoun) will protect the environment which leads to improving air quality and reducing pollution. pollution problems. This is because electric cars don't release harmful gas and fumes like gas-fueled vehicles. This means we humans can solve global warming. Another benefit is that drivers can save their money. As a result, (incorrect transition phrase) most electric cars are installed solar power panels (Incorrect. An electric car is not a solar panel. They are different things. You meant this: Most electric cars have solar panels to supplement their batteries' energy on sunny days.) to provide monetary (wrong word) energy on sunny weather. Owner electric cars (wrong phrasing. "Owner" is not a brand name of these cars.) Owners of these cars will not pay for gas or oil bills.

On the other hand, there are several drawbacks of driving electric of that people drive electrics cars. Firstly, First, electric cars have limitations such as speed, range and power of the battery, and functions. For example, A (No capital letter here) popular electric car is Tesla, (End of sentence. You cannot use a comma to end a sentence.) Their owners have to wait about 4 to 5 hours to fully charge full of its battery while normal gas-powered cars were charged (wrong word. We do not charge regular cars like a cell phone!) about 10 minutes in a gas station and electric car drive lower speed than. (ungrammatical) Secondly, Second, electric cars are more expensive. A main typical (wrong word combination) good example of this is that the price of electric cars is higher 2 times (wrong expression) than common cars and people have to pay a lot of taxes.

The price of electric cars is double that of regular cars.
The price of electric cars is two times higher than that of regular cars.
The price of electric cars is twice that of regular cars.
The price of electric cars is twice as high as regular cars.

In conclusion, it appears to me that the merits benefits of electric cars outweigh are more notable than its drawbacks. If the government authorities reduce the taxes on implement reduce taxed for manufacturing electrics cars, it will provide a chance for companies to update electrics car functions improve their functionality and appeal to many drivers are appeal to their (unfinished sentence)

You must have the same opinion in the conclusion as you state in the introduction. Do not change your opinion in the middle of the essay. You said exactly the opposite in your essay.

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