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Hi there, can anyone check to see if my sentence is correct, if not can you tell my why this must be change? i am having a hard time in english. thank you

  1. There are sunshine every season.

  2. winter is not as cold as the Winter of Ohio, instead it is mild.

  3. One reason I like because I can go many places.

  4. The state colleges are supported by taxes.

  5. I like because of the weather.

  6. I had never caught a cold during the three years in .

  7. The rain fell on my face.

  8. The famous Sequoia trees grow in .

  9. For the last three years, I had traveled thru more than thirty states.

  10. At those moment.

  11. I see my brother’s and sister’s who live out of states.

  12. Those people I haven’t seen for a whole year.
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  1. There are sunshine every season. There is sunshine in every season. (sunshine is singular - so is, not are, and you need the preposition in)
  2. winter is not as cold as the Winter of Ohio, instead it is mild.The California winter [OR: Winter in Californnia] is not as cold as winter in Ohio; instead, it is mild - multiple problems here, including a comma splice.
  3. One reason I like is that I can go many places. Either use "reason" or "because" but not both.
  4. The state colleges are supported by taxes. Okay
  5. I like because of the weather. Okay
  6. I had never caught a cold during the three years I lived in . Past perfect doesn't make sense here.
  7. The rain fell on my face. Okay
  8. The famous Sequoia trees grow in .Okay
  9. For the last three years, I had traveled through more than thirty states.
  10. At those moment. This is not a sentence. Either this moment or those moments.
  11. I see my brothers and sisters, who live out of the states. Never use an ' to make a word plural! Do they live outside of the United States? or the state you live in?
  12. Those people I haven’t seen for a whole year.I haven't seen those people for a whole year.
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1. There is sunshine every season.
2. Winter in California is not as cold as winter in Ohio, instead it is mild.
3. One reason I like California is because I can go to many places.
4. The state colleges are supported by taxes.
5. I like California because of the weather.
6. I had never caught a cold during the three years I was in California.
7. The rain fell on my face.
8. The famous Sequoia trees grow in California.
9. For the last three years, I have traveled through more than thirty states.
10. At the moment.
11. I see my brothers and sisters who live out of the states.
12. I haven't seen those people for a whole year.
AnonymousHi there, can anyone check to see if my sentence is correct, if not can you tell my why this must be change? i am having a hard time in english. thank you

  1. There are sunshine every season.
  2. California winter is not as cold as the Winter of Ohio, instead it is mild.
  3. One reason I like California because I can go many places.
  4. The state colleges are supported by taxes.
  5. I like California because of the weather.
  6. I had never caught a cold during the three years in California.
  7. The rain fell on my face.
  8. The famous Sequoia trees grow in California.
  9. For the last three years, I had traveled thru more than thirty states.
  10. At those moment.
  11. I see my brother’s and sister’s who live out of states.
  12. Those people I haven’t seen for a whole year.
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