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THE TOPIC:

LIVING IN A COUNTRY WHERE YOU HAVE TO SPEAK A FOREIGN LANGUAGE CAN CAUSE SERIOUS SOCIAL PROBLEMS, AS WELL AS PRACTICAL PROBLEMS.

TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?


It is hard to live in countries which use their foreign language instead of your mother tongue because a foreign language is always a hurdle for people to live in other countries where their mother tongue is not usually used. This essay agrees with this topic because of two reasons: Firstly, foreign language will be a barrier for the communication of people and it is also a huge problem for them when they apply for their jobs

Firstly, communication is the main features that can help people to talk to their friends or their family or to express their opinion, the impossibility or difficulty in speaking the foreign language can be a barrier for them to do the above activities. For example, in the meeting of an American company, when you don’t know how to speak English, it seems too hard for you to express your opinion and your ways to help the company as well

Secondly, lack of foreign languages is also a problem for people who want to apply for their job in foreign countries. Language is compulsory factor for people who want to have a profession in foreign countries, the people who can’t speak foreign language can’t have the job, they will have other jobs which use mother tongue and their salary won’t be higher than the job which uses foreign language. For instance, the American currency is higher than Vietnamese’s, so everyone wants to have a job in American companies, but their lack of speaking English hinder them to have the job and force them to work in Vietnamese company which has smaller salary than American’s

In conclusion, the difficulty in speaking foreign languages is a barrier for people when they live in other countries. This essay agrees with the topic because both communication and applying for jobs are two features that are dramatically affected by the lack of foreign language

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Here are your most frequent mistakes:

  1. You have a lot of repetition. Your sentences are excessively verbose.
  2. You make a lot of comma splice errors.
  3. You miss ending punctuation.
  4. Do not use contractions.
  5. Do not use "essay" in your writing. Never! The prompt is "Do you agree?" not "Does your essay agree?"


It is hard to live in countries which use their foreign language (It is not foreign to the local people. English is spoken in the USA. To us, it is not a foreign language. Vietnamese is a foreign language for me. I cannot understand people speaking Vietnamese. But Vietnamese is not a foreign language for you, is it?) instead of your mother tongue (Your sentence has a lot of repetition. ) because a foreign language is always a hurdle for people who to live in other countries where their mother tongue is not usually used. This essay (No, no - essays do not have opinions. You do. Do not use the word "essay" in the first paragraph. Do not mention your writing. It is very bad form.) agrees I totally agree with this topic because of two reasons: Firstly, first, a foreign language will be a barrier for the communication of people and second, it is also a huge major problem for them when applying for a job. they apply for their jobs

(If you write "first", there must also be a "second." First by itself is not good logic. You missed the ending punctuation.)


Firstly, First, communication is the main features that can help means by which people to talk to their friends or their family or to express their opinions, (You have a wimpy comma joining two sentences or main clauses. That is an error of grammar.) the impossibility or difficulty in speaking in a the foreign language can be a barrier for them to do the above activities. For example, in the meeting of an American company, when you don’t (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) know how to speak English, it seems too hard for you to express your opinion and your ways to help the company as well (You missed the ending punctuation.)


Secondly, Second, the lack of fluency in a foreign languages is also a problem for people who want to apply for their job in foreign countries. The ability to speak the language is compulsory factor for people who want to have a profession in foreign countries, (You have a wimpy comma joining two sentences or main clauses. That is an error of grammar.) the people who can’t speak foreign language can’t have the job, (You have a wimpy comma joining two sentences or main clauses. That is an error of grammar.) they will have other jobs which use their own mother tongue and their salary won’t be higher than the job which uses foreign language. For instance, the American dollar currency is higher more valuable than the Vietnamese’s, dong, so everyone wants to have a job in American companies, but their lack of speaking English hinder (wrong verb form) them to get have the job and force (wrong verb form) them to work in a Vietnamese company which pays less. has smaller salary than American’s(You missed the ending punctuation.)

In conclusion, the difficulty in speaking foreign languages is a barrier for people when they live in other countries. This essay agrees with the topic I thoroughly / completely agree because both communication and applying for jobs are two activities features (wrong word) that are dramatically affected by the lack of fluency in the local or business foreign language

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Thai Hoa

I'm really appreciate if you can check my writing essay?

1- I’m really appreciate [ wrong!]

I would really appreciate ... [ right]

2- “appreciate” is a transitive verb, so it needs an object. Therefore, say “I would really appreciate it”.

3- There’s no need to say “writing essay”, since an essay is a piece of writing. Just say “essay”.

4- Only use a question mark to end a question sentence. The above is not a question sentence.

I would really appreciate it if you can check my essay.

I advise you to revise basic grammar and punctuation. Those might seem like small mistakes to you, but they all add up. The fewer mistakes you have, the better your mark will be.

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