Hi teachers, would you please check if this is correct and natural. (please make changes if needed)

A: I'm on my way to pick up my children.

B: I was sorry to hear that Shannon left you.

A: Thank you.

B: So have you given up or do you still hope to get her back? That's what the box of chocolates is for?

A: No, that's not for her. It's for my mom. We're going to visit her.


All good. Well done!