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Can I say,

(a) One day during school recess, Ah Meng saw a boy trying to hide a book in / into the

shirt in the library. At the shocked of the moment, he was angry because of his bad

behaviour.
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>he was angry because of his bad behaviour

This is soooh moralistic and triteEmotion: wink

>At the shocked of the moment

This is wrong.
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Why? do you think that is trite?

How do I correct it?

I got another question.

(a) Ali saw a boy trying to hide a book inside the shirt.

Is that correct?
Use
hide in/under his shirt
not into.

Into is used for verbs of motion. Hide isn't quite such a verb.

(a) One day during school recess, Ah Meng saw a boy trying to hide a book in the

shirt in the library. At the shocked of the moment, he was angry because of his bad

behaviour.

Anyone can help me correct it? Thanks!!
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