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When I was a little girl, I visited China with my family. We first arrived in Shenzhen, a city which is full of amazing architectures. I was so fascinated by those fantastic buildings that I lingered on without any thought of leaving. My family spent our dinner time in a sumptuous restaurant. We can’t beat the savory smell of roasting steak and flavorsome corn soup. Everything went just fine. The next day, Dad took us to see some gorgeous views. We really enjoyed our time there. Time flies when we're having fun. Though our holiday break was only two days long, I hoped that my whole family would enjoy it and make our stay there become an unforgettable memory.
When I was a little girl, I visited China with my family. We first arrived in Shenzhen, a city which is full of amazing architectures. I was so fascinated by those fantastic buildings that I lingered on without any thought of leaving. My family spent our dinner time had dinner in a sumptuous restaurant. We can’t beat the savory smell of roasting steak and flavorsome corn soup. Everything went just fine. The next day, Dad took us to see some gorgeous views. We really enjoyed our time there. Time flies when we're having fun. Though our holiday break was only two days long, I hoped that my whole family would enjoy it and make our stay there become an unforgettable memory.
When I was a little girl, I visited China with my family. We first arrived in Shenzhen, a city which is full of amazing architecture. I was so fascinated by those fantastic buildings that I lingered on without any thought of leaving. My family had dinner in a sumptuous restaurant. We couldn't beat the savory smell of roasting steak and flavorsome corn soup. Everything went just fine. The next day, Dad took us to see some gorgeous views. We really enjoyed our time there. Time flies when we're having fun. Though our holiday break was only two days long, I hoped that my whole family would enjoy it and make our stay there an unforgettable memory.
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