Task 2: Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

School is known as an ideal place where students gain most of their knowledge. But, a lot of students complain that they have trouble focusing on the lessons at school. This essay will examine the main reasons of student's inattention and possible solutions to this problem.


The two main reasons lead to this issue derive from their classmates and their teachers. Almost students make friends at school. And they think that the break times are not enough for them to gossip, they talk during the lessons. As students are always attracted by their classmate's conservation, they hardly notice what the teachers say. For example, my sister, Mary, said that she was prompted by her friends to chat together on phone during the class. And she totally liked that. Moreover, many students often express that the lessons are too hard to understand since the teachers explain unintelligibly. Day by day, they are no longer interested in the class. For instance, The New York Times has reported that around 56% of students had difficulty in comprehending what they were taught by their teachers. Thus, these causes hindrance students from concentrating in school.


Some possible solutions to this problem are encouraging themselves to move on and asking teachers constantly to enlighten them. By motivating themselves back to back, students will find inspiration in the lessons. Only when they know that studying is really helpful to their life, do they focus on the class. Take my friend, Sally, for example, she is always aware of the necessity of learning, so she tries her best during the school lessons. Thereby, she becomes a top student in my school. Furthermore, asking teachers what you do not know is a good method also. It stands out that you can easily concentrate on the lessons after you understand them thoroughly. These ways, help students solve the problem.


To conclude, the classmates and teachers cause the student's inattention in school. However, this issue can be dispatched by motivating themselves and making questions to their teachers to understand the class.

School is known as the an ideal place where students gain most of their knowledge. But, a lot of students complain that they have trouble focusing on the lessons at school. This essay will examine the main reasons of student's inattention and possible solutions to this problem.


In your first paragraph, write a thesis statement that gives very brief answers for the essay prompts. Do not mention your essay. Do not just repeat the instructions, e.g. I am going to answer the questions in this essay.
That is not a good approach for a high score.

Here are the prompts:

What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

Here is a thesis statement that gives the reader an idea of your essay arguments:

That is mainly because they are distracted by their friends in their class, but self-motivation and asking the teachers good questions can take care of it.

Here is your new, improved opening paragraph:


School is known as the place where students gain most of their knowledge. But, a lot of students complain that they have trouble focusing on the lessons at school. That is mainly because they are distracted by their friends in their class, but self-motivation and asking the teachers good questions can take care of it.


The two main reasons lead to this issue derive (ungrammatical. There is no subject for "derive". "to this issue" is a prepositional phrase.) from their classmates and their teachers. Almost students (Incorrect. There are tall students, and skinny students, and good students and pretty students. But there aren't any "almost" students.) make friends at school. And they think that the break times are not long enough for them to gossip, (comma splice error) so they talk during the lessons. As students are always attracted by their classmate's conservation, they hardly notice what the teachers say. For example, my sister, Mary, said that she was prompted by her friends to chat together on their phones during the class. And she totally liked that very much, but could not remember one word of the lesson.. Moreover, many students often express that the lessons are too hard to understand since the teachers do not explain things clearly. unintelligibly. Day by day, After a few days, they are no longer interested in the class. For instance, The New York Times has reported that around 56% of students had difficulty in comprehending what they were taught by their teachers. Thus, these distractions and boring lectures causes hindrance prevent students from concentrating in school.


Some possible solutions to this problem are encouraging the students themselves to move on and asking ask the teachers questions and to give examples. constantly to enlighten them. By motivating themselves back to back, students will find inspiration in the lessons. Only when they know that studying is really helpful to their life, do they focus on the class. Take my friend, Sally, for example. She (comma splice error) is always aware of the necessity of learning, so she tries her best during the school lessons. Thereby, she becomes has become a top student in my school. Furthermore, telling asking teachers what you do not know is a good method also. The teacher can then respond with a demonstration or example. It stands out that you can easily concentrate on the lessons after you understand them thoroughly. These ways, help students solve the problem.


To conclude, the classmates and teachers cause the student's inattention in school. However, this issue can be dispatched by students motivating themselves and making respectfully asking their teachers questions to their teachers to understand the subject being taught. class.

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