In many countries household waste eg. Food packing is increasing day by day. What are the reasons? How can this problem be solved?


There are concerns about the remarkable growth of domestic waste in many parts of the world. I find that the awareness and impact of the media can be some of the main reasons leading to humongous wastage, and the community can take some measures to address these issues.

There is no doubt about thousands of reasons contributing to the huge quantity of household rubbish. One of them is the poor awareness of citizens ignoring environmental issues. For example, those people tend to use plastic bags instead of canvas when shopping. They find those kinds more convenient than the traditional ones, regardless of their negative effects on the ecosystem. Furthermore, advertisements associated with modern lifestyles on media platforms result in a sharp increase in domestic trash. Residents are likely to purchase more household items than they need, such as trendy clothes or electric appliances. As a result, that stuff might quickly become garbage when it is no longer fashionable and eye-catching enough.

However, there are some methods that could help tackle these problems. First, raising awareness about environmentalism through campaigns and lessons by local authorities can play a critical role. Residents are willing to minimize their home garbage when they understand the importance of environmental protection. Second, media companies should create content or innovation for both friendly environmental items and simple lifestyles rather than those related to consumerism. When it comes to trendiness, each person will actively reuse, reduce, and recycle their domestic waste.

In conclusion, people are responsible for significantly large household waste because their awareness and lifestyles depend on the tendency of advertising. Those numbers of domestic waste will increase unless people attempt to restrict their waste, such as taking 3-R methods and caring about global problems.

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There are concerns about the remarkable growth of domestic waste, and in particular from food packaging, in many parts of the world. I find that the awareness and impact of the media can be some of the main There are various reasons behind this unfortunate phenomenon, but effective solutions do exist that can leading to [ 1] humongous wastage, and the community can take some measures to address it. these issues.

There is no doubt about thousands of reasons various factors contributing to the [ 2] huge large quantity of household rubbish. One of them is the people’s poor awareness of citizens ignoring environmental issues. For example, those many people tend to use plastic bags instead of canvas when shopping. They find those kinds more convenient, than the traditional ones, regardless of their negative effects on the environment. ecosystem. Furthermore, advertisements associated with modern lifestyles on media platforms result in a sharp increase in domestic trash. [ 3] Residents People, nowadays, are likely encouraged to purchase more household items than they need, such as trendy clothes or electric appliances. especially consumer goods, junk food, and snacks. That inevitably means more rubbish. As a result, that stuff might quickly become garbage when it is no longer fashionable and eye-catching enough.

However, there are some methods several practical solutions that could help tackle these problems. First, raising awareness about environmentalism the environment through campaigns and lessons seminars by local authorities can play a critical role. Residents are willing more likely to minimize their home garbage household waste when they understand the importance of environmental protection and how pollution impacts them directly. [ 4]

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[ 1]: “humongous” is very informal! DO NOT use it in IELTS.

[ 2]: “huge” is informal.

[ 3]: “residents” means people who live in a particular area.

[ 4]: The rest of that body paragraph does not have persuasive content. You should talk about, for example: recycling, or taxes on plastic waste. If you need more ideas, google “solutions to reducing household waste”.

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And here my new second paragraph of the body part and conclusion, I hope that you can review my essay:


(Introduction and the first paragraph of the body)

(2nd paragraph of the body part) However, there are several practical solutions that could help tackle these problems. First, raising awareness about the environment through campaigns and seminars by local authorities can play a critical role. Residents are more likely to minimize their household waste when they understand the importance of environmental protection and how pollution impacts them directly. They could remarkably reduce their amounts of waste by stopping buying snacks or bottles packed in plastic packaging. They are able to control their shopping habits despite enthusiastic advertising when they are more conscious of protecting the environment, which could create a new movement in advertising standards involved further in 'green' products.
In conclusion, although there are many factors contributing to increase in household waste, there are worthy methods to cope with the issuse such as raising awareness about environmental protection and changing shopping habits.

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However, there are several practical solutions that could help tackle these problems. First, raising awareness about the environment through campaigns and seminars by local authorities can play a critical role. Residents are more likely to minimize their household waste when they understand the importance of environmental protection and how pollution impacts them directly. [ 1] They could remarkably reduce their amounts of waste by stopping buying snacks or bottles packed in plastic packaging. They are able to control their shopping habits despite enthusiastic advertising when they are more conscious of protecting the environment, which could create a new movement in advertising standards involved further in 'green' products. For example, if people understand that polluted waterways can increase the risk of cancer, they would be less likely to dispose of their household waste in the local rivers and lakes.

In conclusion, although there are many factors contributing to [ 2] poor environmental knowledge, and advertising contribute to the increase in household waste, but there are worthy methods to cope with these issues such as raising awareness about environmental protection and changing shopping habits.

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[ 1]: Avoid waffle and repetition. Give an example (like I have done) instead.

[ 2]: The conclusion should summarize the main findings from the body paragraphs.

Thank you so much!

I have re-written this essay with those main ideas:
Body 1:
- Idea 1: reasons

- Supportive 1: poor awareness ->use plastic bags instead of canvas ones, because of convinience

- Supportive 2: ads -> people buy more

Body 2:

- Idea 2: solutions

- Supportive 1: raise awareness -> by campaigns and seminars

- Supportive 2: residents reduce amout of trash

- Supportive 3: law for the companies which use a lot of plastic packing process

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The remarkable growth of domestic trash, such as food packaging, has been a concern in many nations nowadays. Although there are various reasons for this unfortunate phenomenon, people can take some effective measures to tackle it.

There are many factors contributing to the significant increase in household waste. One of them is the lack of awareness about serious issues and their detrimental effects on the environment. For example, they tend to use plastic bags instead of canvas ones when shopping, as they find them more convenient than the latter. Furthermore, both commercial industries and advertisements are other critical factors, resulting in the rising tendency of domestic waste. By providing many incentives for customers to purchase more products than those they need, such as chips and pizzas, they are responsible for increasing domestic trash.

However, I believe that individuals and the government can take some practical methods to address this issue. First, the authorities can organize environmental campaigns and seminars to raise their residents’ knowledge about environmental conservation and the negative impacts it has not only on their health but also on the nation. When people are willing to change their shopping habits and reduce their daily waste, the phenomenon can be minimized. Moreover, the government should introduce new laws and regulations to the product packing process by increasing taxes or fining if some supermarkets or factories use too much plastic packaging, which is difficult to decompose.

In conclusion, there are many reasons why the amount of household trash is increasing, particularly the poor environmental awareness and shopping stimulation. People can cope with this phenomenon by raising education, limiting bad shopping habits, and increasing taxes on non-perishables.

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