The table shows the main method of travel to work in in 2002

The table shows the percentage of the most method that person in different city in k are using it the highest method is the car which 70.6% of person are using it, in Wales 80.4% and in Scotland 69.6% and in north Ireland 79.9% which show us that the car get the highest percentage of another method its mean the car is the main method to travel to work in UK for the year 2002.

is my writting correct?

How can I write a report describing the information in the table?or in line graph hw can i make it as pergraph?
The table shows the percentage of the most method that person in different city in k are using it the highest method is the car which 70.6% of person are using it, in Wales 80.4% and in Scotland 69.6% and in north Ireland 79.9% which show us that the car get the highest percentage of another method its mean the car is the main method to travel to work in UK for the year 2002.

This needs to be at least 3 sentences not just one long one.
mm but if they give me a line graph how can i start dersribing in getting the information in make it a prgraph???
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Well you've started picking out the information already. It's normal to report the results of the graph and make comparisons, in the way that you tried to. You just need to write it more grammatically. Take the information you picked out and re-write it as three proper sentences.

Another hint - I is always capitalised.