How Can I Have My Writing Fixed ?

I'm sorry that your question hasn't been answered, but, sadly, it's very possible that it won't be. We are a small team of unpaid volunteers here, trying to answer the questions people post. Two of our regular teachers are currently unavailable because of circumstances in their lives, including one of our two essay specialists, leaving us very understaffed. This means that quite a few questions are going unanswered at the moment, and unfortunately there isn't much we can do about it. We'd love to find more teachers, but, as you might imagine, finding people with the necessary expertise who are willing to work for free is challenging.