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Dear teachers and friends,

I applied the Company ABC and received an interview invitation.
They asked me whether I'm available for the interview.

I really want the position but this is the first time for me to have an interview in English. So I am not familiar with this kind of things.
I need to reply my availability by email. I think it should be checked by native-English speaker.

Here is the email from him and my draft. Your kind advice in this matter would be most appreciated.

Dear Rie,
We are pleased to invite you to our Company ABC for an interview.Pease provide us with your availability for next two weeks.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Sarah

And here is my draft to her...

Dear Sarah,

Thank you very much for your invitation.I really appreciate the opportunity for an interview. The position is very interesting.
It would be great if you could adjust the schedule on the someday of the following dates.

I am free all day on the September 21st.
I am also free all day on the week starting September 24th.

In addition, I would appreciate it if you could let me know the two points before the interview.

- The detail of type of interview
- The interviewer's name, division and title

I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you very much for your time and trouble.

Best regards,
Rie
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Hi,
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Here are a few edits.

Dear Sarah,

Thank you very much for your invitation.I really appreciate the opportunity for an interview. The position is very interesting.

I am free all day on September 21st., and all day and every day in the week starting September 24th.

In addition, I would appreciate it if you could possibly provide me with this information before the interview.
I've never asked for this type of information. It's your choice, of course.
- The detail of type of interview <<< I don't know what type of information you expect about this
- The interviewer's name, division and title

I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you very much for your time and trouble.

Best regards,
Rie

Clive
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Thank you very much, Clive!
As you say, I will not ask her to provide me with any additional information on the interview.
I appreciate.

Rie