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Atlanta is a common population ;in the U.S. of Georgia . It is eight hours from Indianapolis, Indiana . It has several streets named after it such as Martin Luther King Jr. Most of the people who live in Atlanta Georgia are mostly celebrities such Chris Bridges known as Ludacris and Ciara Harris known as Ciara . Atlanta Georgia is the best palce to go forn an vacation . I enjoy going to Georgia for several reason s . First of all , I can spend time with my father . Since I live with my mother in Indianapolis, and my father lives in Atlanta we only visit so often . However , the time we do spend together its always family time . Sometimes we make homemade flatbread pizza , and homemade chocolate chip cookies too . Another reason is , because I can view the whole city of Atlanta If I wanted to . If I wanted to get a job quick the only place I would go is Atlanta Georgia . Also If I wanted to buy some shoes never had before I would get them from a place called the underground station in atlanta too . Everything there is great and fun . Most importanly you don't have to live thereto know about it either .
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Atlanta is a city common population ;in the U.S. state of Georgia . It is eight hours from Indianapolis, Indiana . It has several streets named after it such as Martin Luther King Jr (Do you mean here that there are several streets names after famous people?). Most Some of the people residents ( this is better grammatically) who live in Atlanta Georgia are mostly celebrities such Chris Bridges, known as Ludacris, and Ciara Harris, known as Ciara . Atlanta Georgia is the a best good palce place to go forn for an a vacation . I enjoy going to Georgia for several reason s reasons. First of all, I can spend time with my father . Since I live with my mother in Indianapolis and my father lives in Atlanta we only visit so often . However, the time we do spend together its is always family time. Sometimes we make homemade flatbread pizza , and homemade chocolate chip cookies too . Another reason is , because I can view the whole city of Atlanta If I wanted to . If I wanted to get a job quickly the only best place I would could go is Atlanta Georgia . Also If I wanted to buy some unique shoes in Atlanta never had before I would get purchase them from a place store called the Underground Station in atlanta too . Everything there (Atlanta or Underground Station?) is great and fun . Most importanly you One doesn't have to live in Atlanta there to know about it(Atlanta or Underground Station).

I'll send you a more detailed rewrite if you are interested. It seems that a lot of what you are writing is written in colloquial (slang/spoken) English. I had trouble with understanding what you were trying to communicate in several of the sentences (highlighted in red). There is also a difference between the word most (meaning a majority, more than 50%) and some (meaning a few, several people). The city has only maybe 1% rich people and less than 0.1% celebrities. Most would mean that there were more than 50% celebrities, which in the Atlanta metro would mean there are at least 2, 500, 000 celebrities!!!! Small things can really change the meaning of sentences.
Thank you so much and I and well interested in more detail if you have it . Thank you so much by the way . Oh and The undergroundstaion was a store in Atlanta Georgia .