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According to the objectives from the CDC, the new senior music education should aim at 1) developing students’ creative abilities and musical abilities, 2) cultivating their aesthetic abilities, 3) extending their knowledge on different kinds of musical cultures, 4) helping them communicate with others effectively using music, 6) helping them cultivate positive attitudes towards and values of music, 6) helping music students further their study on music and work in a music-related career, and 7) promoting music as a life-long career.

Thank you very much.
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Hi,

I'd prefer to speak of the aims of the new senior music education program. Or perhaps curriculum, or plan.

Best wishes, Clive
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Building on the above suggestions--

According to the objectives from the CDC, the aims of the new senior music program should include:

  1. developing students’ creative abilities and musical skills,

  2. cultivating their aesthetic judgment,

  3. extending their knowledge of musical cultures,

  4. helping them communicate effectively with others through the use of music,

  5. helping them cultivate positive attitudes towards music,

  6. helping music students further their studies in a music-related career,

  7. promoting music as a life-long career.


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MyShirleyAccording to the objectives from the CDC, the aims of the new senior music education should include:
  1. developing students’ creative abilities and musical abilities,
  2. cultivating their aesthetic abilities,
  3. extending their knowledge on different kinds of musical cultures,
  4. helping them communicate with others effectively using music,
  5. helping them cultivate positive attitudes towards and values of music,
  6. helping music students further their study on music and work in a music-related career
  7. promoting music as a life-long career.
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