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Hi teachers. Could you please help me. How should I write this so it becomes as natural as posssible? Are any of the 3 suggestions good?


"The doctor called and said he needed to see me about something. It sounded urgent...

So I went to the hospital, and when I got over there he appeared with a very somber expression on his face." (1)

So I went over to the hospital, and then he appeared with a very somber expression on his face." (2)

So I went over to the hospital, where he appeared with a very somber expression on his face." (3)

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anonymousHow should I write this so it becomes as natural as posssible?

The doctor called and said he needed to see me about something. It sounded urgent, so I went to the hospital, and when I got there, he had a very somber expression on his face.

CJ