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Hi again,

Below is an upmteenth sentence from my ever-lasting translation project:

«The light wind brought (with it) the cries of the forest dwellers»

Do you think I should keep the bracketed phrase or get rid of it? And maybe you can suggest a word more atmospheric than "brought"?

Thanks in advance,
Anton
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I like 'with it'. 'Carried' is another choice for 'brought'.
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All right, but does the short version make sence? I am restricted on character count...