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Hi. I'm writing a script:

Mark and Dan get into the back of the RV. Phil shows them around.

Next scene (ten minutes later)

Phil's driving. Mark and Dan come up to him. / Mark and Dan join him in/at the front of the RV.


Hi. How would you write the bold-face sentence? Does one of my suggestions work? Thanks.

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To come up to someone is to approach him and stop close to him commanding his attention, not to come to the front of a thing where he is. So, although they are indeed approaching him, that is not what you mean. You want "Mark and Dan join him at the front of the RV."