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please correct the mistakes in the below introductions of informal letters(friendly register)

1)write to a penfriend who is coming to stay with you.

the Answer:
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Dear Adam,

It was great to hear from you last week and I felt really excited that you would like to come for a visit next month.

I thought I would drop you a line to let you know that You're totally welcome and I am extremely happy that I will see you soon.

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2)write to a friend who is going for a n interview.

Dear James,

I've been meaning to write since I got your last letter but things kept cropping up and I'm afraid I haven't got round to it.

Anyway, I thought I would drop you a line to give you some tips about how in my point of view you could pass the interview.

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3)write to a relative who missed a family celebration

Dear Uncle Tim,

It was sad not having you around in my birthday party . and I felt really bad about you being sick .

so i thought I would drop you a line to check on your health and to see If you have got over your flu yet.

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THANK YOU
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1)write to a penfriend who is coming to stay with you.

the Answer:
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Dear Adam,

It was great to hear from you last week(add period here to prevent run-on sentence) I am (instead of "felt") really excited that you would like to come for a visit next month.

I thought I would drop you a line to let you know that you're (remove capital letter) totally welcome. (add period) I am extremely happy that I will see you soon.

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2)write to a friend who is going for an interview.

Dear James,

I've been meaning to write since I got your last letter but things kept cropping up and I'm afraid I haven't got around (around, not round) to it.

Anyway, I thought I would drop you a line to give you some tips about how in my point of view you could pass the interview. (Below are two options)
Anyway, I thought I would drop you a line to give you some personal tips on how you could pass the interview.
(Bypass "in my point of view" by just saying personal. That is basically what "in my point of view means)
Anyway, I thought I would drop you a line to give you some tips about how (in my point of view) you could pass the interview. (By keeping "in my point of view" but placing it into parentheses. It is okay to do this in English as it will not create a run-on. You may do this as long as the sentence would still make sense even if what you have placed in the parentheses was not there. This is not really basic English. pardon me if this confuses you.
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3)write to a relative who missed a family celebration

Dear Uncle Tim,

It was sad not having you around at my birthday party. (no "and" to begin a sentence) I felt really bad about you being sick.

So, i thought I would drop you a line to check on your health and to see If you have gotten over your flu yet.
Let me know if you have any questions.
ayo1)write to a penfriend who is coming to stay with you.the Answer:-----------------Dear Adam,It was great to hear from you last week(add period here to prevent run-on sentence) I am (instead of "felt") really excited that you would like to come for a visit next month.I thought I would drop you a line to let you know that you're (remove capital letter) totally welcome. (add period) I am extremely happy that I will see you soon.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2)write to a friend who is going for an interview.Dear James,I've been meaning to write since I got your last letter but things kept cropping up and I'm afraid I haven't got around (around, not round) to it.Anyway, I thought I would drop you a line to give you some tips about how in my point of view you could pass the interview. (Below are two options)Anyway, I thought I would drop you a line to give you some personal tips on how you could pass the interview.(Bypass "in my point of view" by just saying personal. That is basically what "in my point of view means)Anyway, I thought I would drop you a line to give you some tips about how (in my point of view) you could pass the interview. (By keeping "in my point of view" but placing it into parentheses. It is okay to do this in English as it will not create a run-on. You may do this as long as the sentence would still make sense even if what you have placed in the parentheses was not there. This is not really basic English. pardon me if this confuses you.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
3)write to a relative who missed a family celebrationDear Uncle Tim,I was sad not having you around at my birthday party. (no "and" to begin a sentence). I felt really bad about you being sick. So, i thought I would drop you a line to check on your health and to see If you have gotten over your flu yet.Let me know if you have any questions about my birthday party.
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Write a letter to your sister telling her reasons why she should come to your school.

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Write a letter to your sister telling her reasons why she should come to your school.

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Dear sister.

I hope you are doing fine,I am also doing great.Guess!what do you think I am writing this letter to you.

As I orleady tells you that I want you to come and do your matric at our school ,because here there is enough accommodation especially for the students who have good grades in grade l0.

Is not only that also the education at our is at high level ,and only learners who did not perform well in English per year .The majority used to pass well.


I hope you are also interesting and looking for such a school.

Your sister marry

Dear Sam,

Lovely to hear from you, how is things? It been along range since we met.Guess! What is in the bag?

Yes! you don’t know what it is, the sole aim is to brief you to changes mind for my school.

Sam, as you already know ,the president himself schooled here and had a well best grade, grade 10.As your role model ,always dream to be at very point of his shadow . This serve as ways to for you to know him as well as better in his academics.

Sis, best students are always well come here .what you are you thinking? I really mean it, well! ,at end of every academic year ,above red line are sponsored to further their education.This will reduce moms and pops burden and save little income for our junior bros and sisters.

Wish to here from you.

Your brother,

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