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Hi Clive or Mister Micawber,

I am applying for a job and i really need someone to correct the grammar mistake. I would be grateful if you can have a glance at it..
  • The reason for my application is because I am a business minded person with great passion for media. I developed my business management skill during the bachelor degree of Management at Manchester University. Practically during my internship at ANZ bank in 2010, I studied the strategic aspect of the banking industry by analysing business strategies, financial budgeting and capital investment with support from the senior management team. Besides the love with business, I also passionate about media and love to work in this fast paced industry. This is the reason why I took one year Practical Film Making at MetFilm School in London. During my time at school, I focused on both the creative and business side of television and filmmaking. An internship at Sky strategy will help me integrate my skills gained from previous working experience to be a professional strategist in media industry.

  • There is no doubt that 2008 and 2009 were the most difficult years for media industry in recent history. Consequence of the recession still significantly affects on Sky and other media companies. Certainly in order to overcome the hard time, most of companies have to cut its marketing budget for advertising to compensate for companies’ maintenances. As the result, Media Companies’ traditional advertising revenue rips apart and dramatically reduced corporate valuations. For this reason, Sky has to develop and implement strategies that ensure the company stands out to continue leading the market.
    Due to the rapid evolving technology, Sky is now not dependent on only traditional distribution method, linear TV but undergoing significant structural shift to “new” media (internet, mobile). For instance, this year, Sky has launched a standalone Sky Movies pack through the new Now TV service, which will be delivered over the internet to PC, games console or smart TV. The new packages of product have given Sky a huge advantage over other competitors, BT and Virgin. By combining different services; landline telephone, broadband, TV channels and Sky Movie, Sky is able to cut its price down and provide better choice of TV channel. Overall, these are the factors that helps Sky confirmed its position as a leader of the market.

    Thank you so so much for your help.

    Cheers,

    Tra Nguyen
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  • The reason for my application is because I am a business minded person with great passion for media. I developed my business management skill during the bachelor degree of Management at Manchester University. Practically during my internship at ANZ bank in 2010, I studied the strategic aspect of the banking industry by analysing business strategies, financial budgeting and capital investment with support from the senior management team. Besides the love with business, I also passionate about media and love to work in this fast paced industry. This is the reason why I took one year Practical Film Making at MetFilm School in London. During my time at school, I focused on both the creative and business side of television and filmmaking. An internship at Sky strategy will help me integrate my skills gained from previous working experience to be a professional strategist in media industry.

  • There is no doubt that 2008 and 2009 were the most difficult years for media industry in recent history. Consequence of the recession still significantly affects on Sky and other media companies. Certainly in order to overcome the hard time, most of companies have to cut its marketing budget for advertising to compensate for companies’ maintenances. As the result, Media Companies’ traditional advertising revenue rips apart and dramatically reduced corporate valuations. For this reason, Sky has to develop and implement strategies that ensure the company stands out to continue leading the market.
    Due to the rapid evolving technology, Sky is now not dependent on only traditional distribution method, linear TV but undergoing significant structural shift to“new” media (internet, mobile). For instance, this year, Sky has launched a standalone Sky Movies pack through the new Now TV service, which will be delivered over the internet to PC, games console or smart TV. The new packages of product have given Sky a huge advantage over other competitors, BT and Virgin. By combining different services; landline telephone, broadband, TV channels and Sky Movie, Sky is able to cut its price down and provide better choice of TV channel. Overall, these are the factors that helps Sky confirmed its position as a leader of the market.
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Mister Micawber

Hi Mister,

Thank you so much for your reply. This is such a good way for me to practise my english. I have bolded my changes. Please let me know there there is other way to correct it.

I am a business-minded person, who has great passion for media. I gained my business management knowledge from a bachelor degree at Manchester University. During my internship at ANZ Bank in 2010, I studied the strategy development of the banking industry by analysing business strategies, financial budgeting and capital investment with support from the senior management team. I am also passionate about media and love to work in this fast-paced industry. Thus I took One-Year Practical Film Making course at MetFilm School in London. I focused on both the creative and business side of television and filmmaking. Evidentially i produced a Web-series "Do Not Disturb" last month which achieved many positive critics. I also directed and filmed few documentaries in Ealing with support from my colleges at Metfilm production. Ultimately an internship at Sky strategy department will help me integrate my skillsto become a professional media strategist.


There is no doubt that 2008 and 2009 were difficult years for media industry. The recession still significantly affects Sky and other media companies. Most of companies tend to cut their marketing budgetto compensate for maintenances. As a result, traditional media advertising revenue slops dramatically and reduces corporate valuations. For this reason, Sky should develop and implement strategies that ensure the company stand out and continue to lead the market. 
Due to the rapidly evolving technology, Sky now does not depend on particular traditional distribution method, Linear TV but undergoes significant structural shift to internet and mobile. For instance, this year, Sky has launched a standalone Sky Movies pack through the new Now TV service, which will be delivered over the internet to PC, Games console or smart TV. The new product packages have given Sky a huge advantage over its competitors, BT and Virgin. By combining different services, landline telephone, broadband, TV channels and Sky Movie, Sky is able to reduce its product’s price and offer more TV channel choices. Overall, these are the factors that help Sky to confirm its position as a market leader.

Many thanks,

Tra Nguyen
You seem to have made many other changes than the problems I have indicated. I am not interested in going over a new text.
I have corrected the problem that i understand but the other underline i really don't know what the problems are Emotion: sad((
  • I am a business minded person with a great passion for media. I developed my business management skill during the bachelor degree in Management at Manchester University. during my internship at ANZ bank in 2010, I studied the strategic aspect of the banking industry by analysing business strategies, financial budgeting and capital investment with support from the senior management team. I am also passionate about media and love to work in this fast paced industry. I took a One Year Practical Film Making at MetFilm School in LondonI focused on both the creative and business side of television and filmmaking. An internship at Sky strategy will help me integrate my skillsto be a professional strategist in media industry.

There is no doubt that 2008 and 2009 were difficult years for media industry . the recession still significantly affects Sky and other media companies. most of companies have to cut their marketing budgetto compensate for maintenances. As the result, Media Companies’ traditional advertising revenue rips apart and dramatically reduces corporate valuations. For this reason, Sky has to develop and implement strategies that ensure the company stand out to continue leading the market.
Due to the rapidly evolving technology, Sky is now not dependent on only traditional distribution method, linear TV but undergoing significant structural shift to internet and mobile. For instance, this year, Sky has launched a standalone Sky Movies pack through the new Now TV service, which will be delivered over the internet to PC, games console or smart TV. The new product packageshave given Sky a huge advantage over its competitors, BT and Virgin. By combining different services; landline telephone, broadband, TV channels and Sky Movie, Sky is able to cut down its priceand provide better choice of TV channel. Overall, these are the factors that help Sky to confirm its position as a market leader.
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actually i want to write the hiring manager the thanks letter who is interested in my application that i sent him few months ago
Start by writing hat you would say if you were talking to him
Then show us.
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Respected Sir,

I am going to home today. I can't able to attend class. I need leave on today.kindly request to you.

Yours faithfully,
x.rams
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Dear Mr [surname],

I am going to go to my home town today, so I won't be able to attend class.

Thank you very much for your understanding.

Yours sincerely,

X. Rams
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