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Hi,

My head of department of my previous company(DEF) will join my current company(ABC) as VP. He is a nice guy and I simply want to write him a welcome email.

Here is my draft:

Dear David,

Welcome to ABC!

Please accept my warmest congratulations and I look forward to supporting you in your new role.

Best regards,
KK (ex-colleague from DEF)

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kidd18Hi,

My head of department of my previous company(DEF) will join my current company(ABC) as VP. He is a nice guy and I simply want to write him a welcome email.

Here is my draft:

Dear David,

Welcome to ABC!

Please accept my warmest congratulations and , as I look forward to supporting you in your new role.

Best regards,

KK (ex-colleague from DEF)

I think you did what I would have suggested.