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I entered college
because I want to earn credits in order to go to the university. However, I
enjoy learning new things. My main goal is to do well in classes, and I know
that I will fulfill, I can sense this. I love my writing and reading classes because I find it fascinating. As a result, I will pass for
these classes because I love the subject. Another reason why I entered college
is because I want to meet new people. I need some nice friends; however, that’s
not my top priority for college. I want to have a better future. In addition, I
want my family to be proud of me. I don’t care what it takes, but I will fulfill
my dream.
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I entered college because I wanted to earn credit in order to go to the university. However, I enjoy learning new things. My main goal is to do well in classes, and I know that I will achieve that , I can sense this. I love my writing and reading classes because I find them fascinating. As a result, I will pass these classes (easily) because I love the subjects. Another reason why I entered college is because I wanted to meet new people. I need some nice friends; however, that’s not my top priority for college. I want to have a better future. In addition, I want my family to be proud of me. I don’t care what it takes, but I will fulfill my dream.
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Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?
Thank you!
I hope that you did not take his advice!!!!