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The task: Quiz -Composition writing

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers.
Do you agree or disagree?
use specific examples and reasons to support your answer.

title : Evaluate teachers

There has been a suggestion to ask students to evaluate their teachers.
some students are in favor of it while others oppose it.

I am in favor of this idea for a variety of reasons.
First and foremost,The student's evaluation is very important for best teachers and others teachers.
The school can make decision who will stay or not stay to continue the career in the school.therefore, the teacher
will be carful with students and give them correct relation when they ask for help.

Finally,the feedback can change the way that teacher taught or invigorate the teacher to go on with this way.

To conclude , there is no doubt that this way improve the school level .In the long run,every body wil benefit from it.

Thanks
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BeginStudentThere has been a suggestion to ask students to evaluate their teachers.
some students are in favor of it while others oppose it.

I am in favor of this idea for a variety of reasons. OK

First and foremost,The student's evaluation is very important for best teachers and others teachers.
bad punctuation - capitalization.
"best teachers and others teachers" - does not make sense. It's better to say "all the teachers"

The school can make decisions on who will stay or not stay to continue their careers in the school.therefore, the teachers
will be careful with students and give them correct relation when they ask for help.
bad punctuation - capitalization.
correct relation - does not make sense. Maybe "good support"?
Teacher should be plural, because it is plural in your topic. You are not talking about one teacher in particular.

Finally,the feedback can change the way that teachers teach (present) taught or invigorate the teachers to go on with this way.
the teacher to go on with this way - not natural - "this way" has no reference.
Better to say "the best teachers to continue doing an excellent job."
To conclude , there is no doubt that this way improve the school level .In the long run,every body wil benefit from it.
this way, level - not natural. "evaluating teachers will improve the quality of the school"
(2 spelling errors).
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I repaired it :

There has been a suggestion to ask students to evaluate their teachers.
some students are in favor of it while others oppose it.

I am in favor of this idea for a variety of reasons.

First and foremost,The student's evaluation is very important for all the teachers.
The school can make decisions on who will stay or not stay to continue their careers in the school.therefore, the teachers
will be careful with students and give them good support when they ask for help.

Finally,the feedback can change the way that teachers teach or encourage the best teachers to continue doing an excellent jpb.

To concluse,there is no doubt that evaluating teachers will improve the quality of the school.

Is it okay?

There has been a suggestion to ask students to evaluate their teachers.
Some students are in favor of it while others oppose it.
I am in favor of this idea for a variety of reasons.

First and foremost, the student's evaluation is very important for all the teachers.
The school can make decisions who will stay or not or who will continue their careers in the school.Therefore, the teachers
will be careful with students and give them good support when they ask for help.

Finally,the feedback can change the way teachers teach or encourage the best teachers to continue doing an excellent job.

To conclude,there is no doubt that evaluating teachers will improve the quality of the school.
You did not make all the repairs.
Remember that sentences begin with a CAPITAL letter, and CAPITALS are used inside a sentence only for proper names.
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I did not see your second post, where you did a good job to make all the corrections.
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