In Vietnam, land is one of problems is being cocerned. During the last three decades, the agricultural policies, especially land policy, have been renovated and we have been able to exploit this resource and develop the potential for agriculture in Vietnam. However, there may be no sustainable development in the agriculture sector. (The main causes for this situation are the slow process of land accumulation and concentration). Therefore, i want learn more from researchs, and administrators about land inssues in the Mekong region as: How to improve farmers' perceptions of agricultural land use changes, policys congrate use land effectively, effective land use policies, find out binding element between businesses and farmers to ensure security when leasing land,…

Besides, i truly want meaning work to do for community, specially people in rural and moutainous areas. This is people group i have met when i participated project in HoaBinh province. They are agricultural labor, and have experiment in poduction process with flapship products are orange and sugar cane. However they have poorly-educated public, limited land policies access…it lead to the slow process of land accumulation and concentration. As a reason, businesses restrictive invest in agriculture compared to the potential of Hoa Binh province.

Organization and teaching summer school are significant work of organizing board and visiting lecturer contribute to solving this problem . I am a novice researcher, therefore i want to do a significant work at smaller level which suitable with my abilities. That is contribute my professional knowledge with collaborative attitude. From there proposed solution assistance cooperative in region, promote role participate and equal approach to resources for small households and ethnic minorities, attracting businesses to invest in agriculture and rural economic.

Lastly, i want to have foster more meaningful relationships in the field. I can glean greater insight from program and acquire a growing sense of the type of researcher.

Hopefully, organizing board will review my application.

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HnaHni Besides, i truly want meaning work to do for community, specially people in rural and moutainous areas. This is people group i have met when i participated project in HoaBinh province. They are agricultural labor, a

"i" is the ninth letter of the alphabet. Letters cannot desire or want things. Letters don't meet people or participate in activities.

oh, thanks you. I will check again my essay.

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In Vietnam, land is one of the hot topics of discussion in society. problems is being cocerned. During the last three decades, the agricultural policies, especially the land policy, have been renovated drastically revised, and we have been able to exploit this resource and develop the potential for agriculture in this country. Vietnam. However, there may be no sustainable development in the agriculture sector . (The main causes for this situation are due to the slow process of land accumulation and concentration. Therefore, I want to learn more from research, and administrators about land issues in the Mekong region, as: especially how to improve farmers' perceptions of agricultural land use changes, policies congrate for effective use of land, effectively, effective land use policies, find out binding element and the link between businesses and farmers to ensure security when leasing land.

Besides, I truly want to participate in meaningful work to do for be able to benefit my community, especially people in rural and mountainous areas. This is These are people group i have I met when I participated in a project in Hoa Binh Province. They are mostly agricultural laborers , and have experiment working in the production process with flapship products are of flagship crops such as oranges and sugar cane. However they have are poorly-educated public, and have limited awareness of, and access to, land policies. access…it That leads to the slow process of land accumulation and concentration. As a reason, result, businesses restrictive investment in agriculture is limited, given compared to the potential of Hoa Binh Province.

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thanks #teechr for your check.

i revised base on your advise.

So, this is my essay. Hopefully you can check it if you have leisure time.

In Vietnam, land is one of the hot problem of discussion in society. During the last three decades, the agricultural policies, especially the land policies, have been revised and we have been able to exploit this resource and develop the potential for agriculture in Vietnam. However, there may be no sustainable development in the agriculture sector. (The main causes for this situation are the slow process of land accumulation and concentration). Therefore, i want to learn more from researches, and administrators about land inssues in the Mekong region, particularly: How to improve farmers' perception using agricultural land, policies encourage to use land effectively, effective land use policiesand the link between businesses and farmers to ensure security when leasing land,…

Besides, i truly want to participate in meaning work to be able to benefit my community, especially people in rural and moutainous areas. There are people groups i met when i participated project in HoaBinh province. They are mostly agricultural laborers and have experiment in poduction of flapship products such as orange and sugar cane. However they are poorly-educated and have limited awareness off and access to land policies. That leads to the slow process of land accumulation and concentration. As a result, businesses invest restrictively in the agriculture sector comparing the potential of Hoa Binh province. Moreover, i realize ineffectively the implementation land policies in some regions of Vietnam partly due businesses invest to agriculture with purpose receive preferences from government. That leads to bussiness will abandone if they are loss-making. Lastly, the disadvantaged is farmers who agreed to let business lease land.

I am a novice researcher, the number of project and seminar which i participated are modest amount and mostly in my country. Therefore i want to paiticipate the international environment with purpose to improve my professional knowledge and have glean greater insight in this field. From there proposed solution assistance cooperative in region, promote role participation and equal approach to resources for small households and ethnic minorities in land transformation in the national industrialisation and modernisation process.

Lastly, i want to advance social skill and foster more meaningful relationships in research field. I knowed summer school is where welcome from early-career academic, government staff and those working with civil society organizations from six countries of Mekong region with different ages. This is opportunity to improve my communication skill and interpersonal skills in professional academic environment. From there i can acquire a growing sense of the type of researcher.

Hopefully, organizing board will consider my application.

HnaHni Thanks #teechr for your check.

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HnaHni I have revised the essay based on your advice.

I would like you to revise it again. Do not change the text I wrote. Also, always capitalize the personal pronoun "I". Post below.

By the way, what is the application deadline?

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the application deadline is 17/5. I think It is quite urgent

This is the text you wrote

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In Vietnam, land is one of the hot topics of discussion in society.problems is being cocerned.During the last three decades, the agricultural policies, especially the land policy, have been renovateddrastically revised, and we have been able to exploit this resource and develop the potential for agriculture in this country.Vietnam. However, there may be no sustainable development in the agriculture sector . (The main causes for this situation aredue to the slow process of land accumulation and concentration. Therefore, I want to learn more from research, and administrators about land issues in the Mekong region,as:especially how to improve farmers' perceptions of agricultural land use changes, policiescongratefor effective use of land,effectively, effective land use policies, find out binding elementand the link between businesses and farmers to ensure security when leasing land.

techr

[ I stopped here because I found the rest of the text difficult to understand. Please rewrite it in a simpler and more direct way. You can post the revised version below if you like]

this is the next section that i worte again.



I am a novice researcher, the number of project and seminar which i participated are modest amount and mostly in my country. Therefore i want to paiticipate the international environment with purpose to improve my professional knowledge and have glean greater insight in this field. From there proposed solution assistance cooperative in region, promote role participation and equal approach to resources for small households and ethnic minorities in land transformation in the national industrialisation and modernisation process.

Lastly, i want to advance social skill and foster more meaningful relationships in research field. I knowed summer school is where welcome from early-career academic, government staff and those working with civil society organizations from six countries of Mekong region with different ages. This is opportunity to improve my communication skill and interpersonal skills in professional academic environment. From there i can acquire a growing sense of the type of researcher.

Hopefully, organizing board will consider my application.

In Vietnam, land is one of the hot topics of discussion in society. During the last three decades, the agricultural policies, especially the land policy, have been drastically revised, and we have been able to exploit this resource and develop the potential for agriculture in this country. However, there may be no sustainable development in the agriculture sector due to the slow process of land accumulation and concentration. Therefore, I want to learn more from research, and administrators about land issues in the Mekong region, especially how to improve farmers' perceptions of agricultural land use changes, policies for effective use of land, and the link between businesses and farmers to ensure security when leasing land.

Besides, I truly want to participate in meaningful work to be able to benefit my community, especially people in rural and mountainous areas. These are people I met when I participated in a project in Hoa Binh Province. They are mostly agricultural laborers working on the production of flagship crops such as oranges and sugar cane. However they are poorly-educated and have limited awareness of, and access to, land policies. That leads to the slow process of land accumulation and concentration. As a result, businesses investment in agriculture is limited, given the potential of Hoa Binh Province.

I am a novice researcher, and the number of projects and seminars which I have participated in is modest and mostly in my country. Therefore, I am eager to participate in international programs in order to improve my professional knowledge and glean greater insight in this field. I hope to contribute to providing useful solutions and assistance to cooperatives in my region, promote role participation and equal approach to resources for small households and ethnic minorities, especially in land transformation in the national industrialisation and modernisation process.

Lastly, I hope to advance my social skills and foster more meaningful relationships in my field of research. I know summer school is ideal for early-career academics, government staff and those working with civil society organizations from the six countries of the Mekong region. Thus, this is the ideal opportunity for me to improve my communication and interpersonal skills in a professional academic environment.

I thank you for taking the time to consider my application, and I await your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Hna Hni

teechr

In Vietnam, land is one of the hot topics of discussion in society. During the last three decades, the agricultural policies, especially the land policy, have been drastically revised, and we have been able to exploit this resource and develop the potential for agriculture in this country. However, there may be no sustainable development in the agriculture sector due to the slow process of land accumulation and concentration. Therefore, I want to learn more from research, and administrators about land issues in the Mekong region, especially how to improve farmers' perceptions of agricultural land use changes, policies for effective use of land, and the link between businesses and farmers to ensure security when leasing land.


Besides, I truly want to participate in meaningful work to be able to benefit my community, especially people in rural and mountainous areas. These are people I met when I participated in a project in Hoa Binh Province. They are mostly agricultural laborers working on the production of flagship crops such as oranges and sugar cane. However they are poorly-educated and have limited awareness of, and access to, land policies. That leads to the slow process of land accumulation and concentration. As a result, businesses investment in agriculture is limited, given the potential of Hoa Binh Province.


I am a novice researcher, and the number of projects and seminars which I have participated in is modest and mostly in my country. Therefore, I am eager to participate in international programs in order to improve my professional knowledge and glean greater insight in this field. I hope to contribute to providing useful solutions and assistance to cooperatives in my region, promote role participation and equal approach to resources for small households and ethnic minorities, especially in land transformation in the national industrialisation and modernisation process.


Lastly, I hope to advance my social skills and foster more meaningful relationships in my field of research. I know summer school is ideal for early-career academics, government staff and those working with civil society organizations from the six countries of the Mekong region. Thus, this is the ideal opportunity for me to improve my communication and interpersonal skills in a professional academic environment.


I thank you for taking the time to consider my application, and I await your reply.


Yours faithfully,


Hna Hni


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