Hi guys,

I am in stuck with the following piece, which is supposed to serve as THE motivation letter for advertised position of a "Person in Charge of International Relations". Shortly, the vacnacy is coming from the EU commercial and external communication policy fields. I would highly appreciate your help and comments. Pls. also check my grammer, as I am not a native English speakerm however it should me a shame for me to still make rude mistakes.

Thankful in advance for prompt and constructive replies.

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"Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to register my interest in the position of Person in Charge of International Relations currently opened at .... This vacancy has interested me because of its relevancy to my prior professional and academic experience and due to my strong belief that I can make a considerable contribution.

Working for the ..., which acts as an advisor for business matters in the State of Maine, I was accountable for consulting of over 200 U.S. companies on matters of initiation and continuous improvement of successful trade activity with their European partners. Closely cooperating with business alliances, EU customs specialists, foreign embassies and chambers of commerce, my team was seeking to promote US and EU mutual interest, foster international trade investment and help companies to succeed in intercontinental markets. This experience together with my other employments as Business Development Manager and Export Consultant in leading companies of Austria and Denmark equipped me with the in-depth understanding of EU policy; it also helped me to develop strong analytical ability, excellent negotiation and international management skills.

Having been given an opportunity of assisting at the International Purchasing and Supply Management Section of International Trade Center (WTO/UNCTAD), I developed exceptional abilities to maintain and effectively build far-reaching client interactions within a broad range of industries on different decision-making levels.

While managing several international projects, I have demonstrated proficiency and exclusive skills in worldwide business environment, which I believe, make me a particularly strong candidate for the position of Person in Charge of International Relations.

Thank you very much for considering my application.

I look forward to your positive response.

Sincerely,

Seeker"
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I am writing to express my interest in the position of Person in Charge of International Relations currently opened at .... I am interested to fill up this vacancy because of its relevance to my prior professional and academic experiences. I strongly believe that I can make a considerable contribution in your company.

As a consultant for business affairs for ... in the State of Main, I worked with over 200 U.S. companies for the continuous improvement of successful trade activity with their European partners.

Closely cooperating with business alliances, EU customs specialists, foreign embassies and chambers of commerce, my team was seeking to promote US and EU mutual interest, foster international trade investment and help companies to succeed in intercontinental markets (Sentence is too long. Perhaps you can separate it with 2 or more sentences. I can't figure out what you are trying to say here but you can try this)

Some of the highlights in my professional career are as follows:

  • Closely cooperating with business alliances, EU customs specialists, foreign embassies and chambers of commerce,
  • my team was seeking to promote US and EU mutual interest, foster international trade investment and help companies to succeed in intercontinental markets


  • This experiences together with my other employments as Business Development Manager and Export Consultant of some of the leading companies in Austria and Denmark equipped me with the in-depth understanding of EU policy; it also helped me to develop strong analytical ability, excellent negotiation and international management skills.

    Having been given the opportunity to assist at the International Purchasing and Supply Management Section of International Trade Center (WTO/UNCTAD), I have developed some exceptional abilities to maintain and effectively build far-reaching client interactions within a broad range of industries on different decision-making levels.

    While managing several international projects, I have demonstrated proficiency and exclusive skills in worldwide business environment, which I believe, make me a particularly strong candidate for the position of Person in Charge of International Relations.

    Thank you very much for considering my application.

    I look forward to your positive response.

    Sincerely,

    Seeker

    * Those that are edited are italized
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Cool Boy,

Thanks a lot for your time and improvements Emotion: smile! It does defenetly sound better with your changes..

What about the difference between "relevance" and r"elevancy"? Is it style or some logical mistake I am making when mixing these two words? ...

One more question: "This experiences together with my other ...". Should I use "these" for plural?

And yet: "Denmark equipped me with THE or AN in-depth understanding of EU policy?"

Appreciate your help