i need your help please check my grammar

When I was juvenile and faultless I never bothered what things are going on in my life, but as a young child my parent’s teach me to be a good, loving and caring girl who have a hope, ambition and desire, a girl who loved to smile and never forget to thank the Lord for all the blessings and now I was suddenly blooms to be a Lady. A Lady who is simple, God-fearing, trustworthy, and a loving person who loves to smile to everyone.

Above all I would like to thank the Lord by giving me parents who are lovable, caring and always at my side, parents who develop me to grow as a simple yet a loving person.

To my dearest “father and mother” thank you for everything, I will not grow like this if you are not here who loved, teach and guide me since birth and until now that I turn 18.

To my brother and sister thank you for your support, loved and help even in time of trouble and for my friends, relatives and loved ones thank you for everything for all your care, loved and understanding. I’m very thankful and lucky for having all of you in my life! Thank you very much.
When I was a baby I never worried about what was happening in my life, but as a young child my parents taught me to be a good, loving and caring girl. A girl who had hope and ambition and (desire - I'd choose another word. This is usually taken to mean sexual desire, unless you spell out a desire for 'whatever) who loved to smile and never forgot to thank the Lord for all her blessings.Now I have bloomed into a Lady. A Lady who appreciates simple things, is God-fearing, trustworthy, and a loving person who still loves to smile at everyone.

I've changed your use of simple above as a description of your personality. I know you what you mean. I've been to a big birthday celebration where a speech-giver complimented the person on their simple nature. However, they were not a group of native English speakers. If this use of simple is accepted in your culture, then ok. However, in other types of English when you call a person 'simple' its usual meaning is a negative one, meaning stupid. So check your culture's use of this word as you have it twice in your description.

Above all I would like to thank the Lord for giving me parents who are loving, caring and always at my side - parents who helped me develop into a simple and loving person.

To my dearest “father and mother” thank you for everything, I would not have grown like this if you had not been here to love, teach and guide me since birth, right up till now when I turn 18.

To my brother and sister thank you for your support, loved and help even in time of trouble and for my friends, relatives and loved ones thank you for everything for all your care, loved and understanding. I’m very thankful and lucky for having all of you in my life! Thank you very much.
thank you for your advice I really appreciate that hhehe thank you very much, i will changed that heheh thank you

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