I will grateful if anyone could tell me if, what i have written, answers the question "How do you fit within your organization" propely.

I need to send it in a day and i will appreciate your advice.

In August 2005 I began working for /the name of the organization/ Ltd. in order to conduct a new department. The company performs a wide array of accounting, audit and consulting activities for our clients. Accounting department supplies different companies with accounting and consulting services. Internal audit department was found to determine whether accounting department is carrying out its functions in accordance with established accounting procedures and principles.

I am working as an internal auditor and performing external audits as well. My role in the department is to provide the Director with analysis, appraisals, recommendations, and information concerning the reviewed companies, so, our client’s Directors could resolve to make requiring corrective actions in time.

In terms of an increase in the number of customers, there is the plan for future expansion of the organization. As a result, in a couple of months I will hold the position of the manager of internal audit department and have, at least, two subordinates.

Thanks in advance.
Yes, I think it answers the question of how you fit into your organization. You might want to indicate an average size for your clients, in terms of annual turnover or other indication of size of operations. I have cleaned up the text:

In August 2005, I began working for /the name of the organization/ Ltd. as part of a new department. The company performs a wide array of accounting, audit and consulting activities for our clients. The accounting department supplies these companies with accounting and consulting services. The internal audit department was established to determine whether the accounting department is carrying out its functions in accordance with established[/generally accepted?] accounting procedures and principles.

I am working as an internal auditor and performing external audits as well. My role in the department is to provide the Director with analyses, appraisals, recommendations, and information concerning the companies under review, in order for their directors to take timely corrective action.

An increase in the number of customers is expected and future expansion of the organization is planned. As a result, within a few months I will hold the position of Manager of the internal audit department and supervise two or more subordinates.
Thank you so much! These articles are disaster for me! I was sure I put them all :-(

I hope one day I will write in English as native speakers do. I wish I could...