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Hi there, I'm new here. As I talk, I just finishing my writing exam and I don't know it's correct or not so I'm so willing to receiving help from you guys.

Topic: Describe a film/movie actor from your country who is very popular.

Here is my exam:

If you ask me who is my favorite actor, I would say that Viet Anh is the one. He’s a member of a team call 1977 which is including 3 members. They doing film adapted from literature was written by famous authors in Vietnam. I remember the first time I saw those videos, I was amazed at their talent. It’s just a short cut of the film but It’s also awesome, creative, comedy and meaningful. They also are actors, directors, producers, screenwriters and so on with just 3 people.


I love all of them but I like Viet Anh more. Viet Anh he has a twin named Viet Trung. They look the same, sometimes I can’t know who is Viet Anh who is Viet Trung but most of the time I could recognize Viet Anh. He has longer hair then Viet Trung, darker and having a sunshiny smile. He’s so funny.

I know the describe call Indie recently. They are. You know in the first video of them, it went viral in Vietnam with a million views for just a couple of weeks. I watch a file call Lão Hạc a thousand times with no boring. Viet Anh acts as the main actor call Lao Hac. Lao Hac is a poor farmer. His properties are a little garden and a dog called Cau Vang. It reflects the life of the farmers in French colonial times. After sick, he couldn’t make the money by himself. He sells the dog who is friends of him and then suicides himself. Viet Anh was successfully to express Lao Hac's feeling by his eyes. Until saw the video, I’m being Viet Anh’s fan.

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Vy Khánh Lê I just finishing finished my writing exam and I don't know if it's correct or not. So I'm so willing to get receiving help from you guys.

There are a lot of mistakes in your writing. I have given you corrections except for one sentence that I could not understand.


If you ask me who is my favorite actor is, I would say that Viet Anh is the one. He’s a member of a team group called / named 1977 which has three is including 3 members. They are making a doing film adapted from literature was written by famous authors in Vietnam. I remember the first time I saw those videos, (comma splice error, ungrammatical sentence.) I was amazed at their talent. It’s just a short segment cut of the film but It’s (capitalization error) also awesome, creative, comedy (comedy is a noun. You need an adjective - funny) and meaningful. They also are actors, directors, producers, screenwriters and so on with just 3 people. The three members of 1977 share all the jobs of making a film: actor, director, producer, screenwriter and cinematographer.


I love all of them but I like Viet Anh more. Viet Anh he has a twin named Viet Trung. They look the same, sometimes I can’t know which who is Viet Anh and which who is Viet Trung but most of the time I could can recognize Viet Anh. He has longer hair then than Viet Trung, is darker and has having a sunshiny smile. He’s so funny.

I know the describe call Indie recently. (I don't know what you want to say here. It is not good English.) They are. You know in their first video of them, it went viral in Vietnam with a million views for in just a couple of weeks. I watch watched a file call film called Lão Hạc a thousand times without being bored. no boring. Viet Anh acts as the main actor named call Lao Hac. Lao Hac is a poor farmer. His properties are owns a little garden and a dog called Cau Vang. It reflects the life of the farmers in French colonial times. After he gets sick, he couldn’t can't make any the money by himself. He sells his the dog who is his best friend, friends of him and then commits suicide. suicides himself. Viet Anh was successfully to expressed Lao Hac's feeling by the expressions in his eyes. Until After I saw the video, I’m being became a fan of Viet Anh’s fan.

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