I need some advice especially on the first sentence. I don't know if it is a runon or comma splice or whatever. I can't figure out how else to word it so that it conveys what I want to say. Any other advice on the short essay would help.

Distance learning is a convenient approach to gaining an education using online classrooms where the students correspond with one another and the instructor, even though they are not face to face. Whether it's a limited amount of time, a distant campus, or a physical disability, students can gather together online with the aid of online college. The student only logs online to their course's online classroom where they can access their course syllabus, calendar, and forum. A forum is a place where topics are placed and responded to. You can have public discussions, which are often called threaded discussions because like an e-mail you can reply to a starting post and the replies to that post. This offers asynchronous communication because the students and instructors can discuss topics without being together or being online at the same time. Another component of the forum is the students individual forum where the student can turn in assignments, ask the instructor questions, and get feedback on their work from the instructor. By using the online classroom and its forums, the students and instructor receive full advantage of the course without being face to face.


Distance learning is a convenient approach to gaining an education have necessary information using online classrooms where the students and the instructors correspond with one another and the instructor even though they are not face to face Whether it's a without the problems of limited amount of time, a distant campus or a physical disability, students can gather together online with the aid of online college. The student only logs online to their course's online What students have to do is just to log in, so that classroom where they can have access to their course syllabus, calendar, and forum. A forum is a place where topics are placed and responded to. You can have public discussions which are often called threaded discussions because like an e-mail you can reply to a starting new ? post and the replies to that post. This offers asynchronous communication because the students and instructors can discuss topics without being together or being online at the same time. Another component of the forum is the students individual forum where the students can turn in (what do you mean ?) assignments, ask the instructor questions, and get feedback on their works from the instructors. By using the online classroom and its forums, the students and instructors can receive have a full advantage of the courses without being face to face.

i join the course in between 4:00-5:30