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could honorable masters check the below par?

"I personally disagree with public ideas that stand against women engagement into police force and address these women as bad persons; while on the contrary, we want women to keep their Islamic ethics everywhere they are as this is an art itself. They should prove their efficiency and behave healthily within the society so that they encourage others and also serve their families, sisters and compatriots as to be a symbol and can help others."
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Hi

honorable masters-----I am not one, but I would revise your paragraph.

Personally, I disagree with public ideas that stand against women engagement into police force and address these women as bad persons. On the contrary, we want women to keep their Islamic ethics everywhere they go, as this is an art by itself. They(women) should prove their efficiency and behave healthily within the society so that they encourage others and also serve their families, sisters and compatriots. They should be a symbol which can help and inspire others.(added a few words to make it better)

Prajwal

Hi,

Thank you dear Prajwlkr! I think it is now better and I hope you can keep up completing my future texts!
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how the government can change public attitude to a positive look on these women?
Hi

Here is the correct sentence----

How can the government change the public attitude to a positive look on these women?

Prajwal