Different types of robots are now being developed which can be friend to human and can help them at work or at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
Robots have become increasingly more common in recent years, serving as a companion and providing support to humans from the workplace to the family. Despite the potential risks posed by over-reliance on machines, I would argue that robotics has brought us numerous advantages.
On the one hand, some may say that technology users tend to be over-dependent on assistive robots. Since they can take responsibility for an ever-increasing number of tasks, ranging from cleaning to cooking and even more sophisticated ones like scheduling and reception management, human involvement has decreased over time, together with the necessary skills associated with such work. This is evident in digital natives- generations Y and Z, who, more than previous generations heavily rely on robots and lack multiple skills to lead an independent life. While this is undeniable, I would contend that modern times have seen the need for such skills with more time for acquiring crucial new ones such as computer literacy.
On the other hand, several benefits are brought about by robots. Firstly, because of the cutting-edge robotics system, millions of employees worldwide, particularly the low-skilled ones, will lose their jobs which increases the unemployment rate among unskilled workers, leading to a rise in unemployment and related social problems such as higher crime rates. Although it is true to some extent, I believe that with the advent of robots and technological advancements, economies are shifting to require a more skilled workforce of people with good analytical skills and creative thinking abilities rather than unskilled labor. Consequently, more skilled workers will join the workforce, contributing to economic development and the invention of more technological innovations to benefit humankind.
In conclusion, human life has been transformed due to the advent of robots. Despite certain drawbacks of robots both at home and in the work environment. I believe that the application of such automated machinery is overall beneficial.
park navy 126Different types of robots are now being developed which can be friend to human and can help them at work or at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
Did you copy the task accurately? It is not good English.
Different types of robots are now being developed which can be friends to people humans and can help them at work or at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
park navy 126Is this a positive or negative development?
I do not see a clear answer to the prompt. It is very important that the examiner can understand your position.
So you have to include a sentence in the introduction like one of these:
This is an incredibly positive development.
Overall, it is a negative development.
Then your two body paragraphs support your opinion.
You must take one side, not both sides. This is not a "discuss both views" essay. It is not an "advantages/disadvantages" essay. If you write the wrong essay type, you lose a lot of points for task response.
Robots have become increasingly more common in recent years, serving as a companion and providing support to humans people from the workplace to the family. Despite the potential risks posed by over-reliance on machines, I would argue that robotics has brought us numerous so many advantages that it is a very positive development.
On the one hand, (That transition phrase is for "discuss both views" or "advantages/disadvantages" Do not use it for an opinion essay.) some may say that technology users (That makes no sense. We all use kitchen appliances, computers, vehicles, and electricity.) we tend to be over-dependent (That does not seem positive.) on assistive robots. Since they can take responsibility for over an ever-increasing number of tasks, ranging from cleaning to cooking and even more sophisticated ones like scheduling and reception management, human involvement the role of people has decreased over time, together with the necessary skills associated with such work. This is evident in digital natives- (That makes no sense.) generations Y and Z, who, more than previous generations heavily rely on robots and lack multiple skills (What skills are you talking about? I have a robotic vacuum cleaner, but I still know how to use a broom and dustpan. You need to explain specific things, not broad rather vacuous generalities. ) to lead an independent life. While this is undeniable, I would contend that modern times have seen the need for such skills with more time for acquiring crucial new ones such as computer literacy. (This entire paragraph is off-topic. You need to write a paragraph that supports your view. The task is not about computer literacy or education.)
On the other hand, several benefits are brought about by robots. (You need to delete this sentence because it is the topic sentence for both body paragraphs.) Firstly, because of the cutting-edge robotics system, (Which one are you referring to?) millions of employees worldwide, particularly the low-skilled ones, will lose their jobs (Is that a benefit?) which increases the unemployment rate among unskilled workers, leading to a rise in unemployment (That does not seem to be something positive!) and related social problems such as higher crime rates. Although it is true to some extent I believe that (Do not write opinions in your body paragraphs. Your opinion is in the introduction. The body paragraphs support your opinion.) with the advent (wrong word.) of robots and technological advancements, economies are shifting to require a more skilled workforce of people with good analytical skills and creative thinking abilities rather than unskilled labor. Consequently, more skilled workers will join the workforce, contributing to economic development and the invention of more technological innovations to benefit humankind.
In conclusion, human life has our lives have been transformed due to the advent of robots. Despite certain drawbacks of robots both at home and in the work environment. I believe that the application of such automated machinery is overall beneficial.
If you argue against your position, you will lose a lot of points. You need to clearly take a position, express it, and then write two primary reasons, with examples, in the two body paragraphs.
You did not give any example of a robot and how it helps in the home, or in the workplace.
For example:
My cousin had a baby recently and bought a baby monitor. It monitors vital signs like temperature, heart rate and breathing and will sound an alarm if something is wrong.
Robots in the future will be much more sophisticated. In particular, it is forecast that there will be robots to help elderly people with chores around the house, make sure they take their medications correctly, and alert the relatives or neighbors if there is a problem.